Outstanding essay very well researched and cited.
- 27/04/2006
- 19:28:25
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Very eloquent.
- 18/04/2006
- 21:55:51
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Homer isn't homosexual he's just not the marrying kind...it's a common mistake.
- 23/02/2006
- 00:56:34
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Good points but poorly written.
- 07/12/2005
- 19:05:44
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Hispanics, Asians, Blacks...they are minorities and with this term they are given more opportunities through affirmitive action and are given a greater chance to succeed.
- 07/12/2005
- 18:56:56
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A bit inaccurate.
- 09/11/2005
- 19:24:25
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Great essay well written if u have any more essays from ur AP History class please post.
- 30/10/2005
- 11:31:53
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Excellent writing.
- 19/10/2005
- 13:27:12
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He's actually 17 when he's retelling the story...he was 16 throughtout the story...as for the author of this essay...go read the book.
- 06/10/2005
- 18:53:33
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You must be ignorant...."Catcher in the Rye" is a book that shows the teenage troubles of becoming an adult.
- 06/10/2005
- 18:51:24
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Except for the introduction which felt very generic the rest of the bookreport is fine.
- 06/10/2005
- 16:51:26
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Conclusion is weak ...rest of the essay is good.
- 03/10/2005
- 18:47:49
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Well written and seems well researched..helped me with my biography on Hitler.
- 03/10/2005
- 18:46:26
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Far too terse, I agree with keir.
- 02/10/2005
- 18:42:14
- Score: 0 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Very good essay... I like the topic.
- 02/10/2005
- 18:39:29
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Good idea...well thought out essay.
- 02/10/2005
- 18:36:29
- Score: 9 out of 25 people found this comment useful.
Excellent criticism of the book...well written.
- 02/10/2005
- 18:05:49
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It was a bit redundant at times. Gramatics weren't there, but it was a good beginning idea
- 26/08/2005
- 13:35:15
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Very helpful tips. Thank you for sharing them with us
- 26/08/2005
- 12:27:25
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
doesnt go into any detail at all needs some examples
- 21/05/2005
- 15:07:24
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Makes good points, but it is def not great writing
- 27/02/2005
- 20:34:57
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Good examples but your writing lacks a certain strength
- 27/02/2005
- 20:31:45
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extremely helpful, I needed to analyze this for my ap class thx
- 27/02/2005
- 20:28:45
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absolutely nothing to critisize great work keep it up
- 14/02/2005
- 15:23:09
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very informative helped me in a test thx
- 14/02/2005
- 15:18:45
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excellent points....high school 13th grade??
- 14/02/2005
- 12:32:53
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
You need a better conclusion
- 14/02/2005
- 12:29:30
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Well written, nice sentence structure
- 14/02/2005
- 12:27:36
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I agree with it being too short but i guess brevity is wit .haha anyways even though i dont agree i do see ur point on this issue
- 14/02/2005
- 12:21:57
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Good examples and u picked quite and interesting topic
- 14/02/2005
- 12:18:11
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incredible paper. Its well researched ...great job
- 06/02/2005
- 16:50:25
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
yes thats exceptional writing from an 8th grader.. hope to see more from ypu
- 06/02/2005
- 16:42:47
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
informational but there are grammatical errors and you use the name Poe waaaaaaay too much
- 17/10/2004
- 14:43:35
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No way in hell did u get a 95 for this essay unless your teacher was being generous. The essay shows that you have little understanding of what you're speaking of. Repetitive...
- 13/10/2004
- 19:28:26
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Cute story inventive
- 25/09/2004
- 11:05:41
- Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
THis is a controversial topic but i saide with your opinion
- 25/09/2004
- 10:57:57
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Well written grmatically correct essay b+
- 25/09/2004
- 10:56:31
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Beautifully written essay. Very helpful
- 21/05/2004
- 22:56:46
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Very helpful, but most of this is from the same website. I was there too. LOL
- 07/04/2004
- 20:33:58
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Even though the words used could be better it is pretty much correct. Although I do have 1 correction: Romeo and Juliet met at the Capulet's Party and not at a festival.
- 27/03/2004
- 20:06:36
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This drug really should be taken of the market. Very informative.
- 26/03/2004
- 18:19:07
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Well explained and clearly understood
- 26/03/2004
- 18:06:30
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The information displayed well displayed, but it's explained in a childish manner. It does not seem to be an essay from a Junior in High School.
- 19/03/2004
- 18:23:19
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This essay lacks a certain flow. It is very imfomative and on an interesting topic. I think it deserves more like a B+ than an A+.
- 16/03/2004
- 20:38:32
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I think It was very clear explaining the ideas and organized. This essay should have received more than a 71.
- 16/03/2004
- 20:32:59
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I myself being hispanic believe this was a great topic to write about. The ideas were well-developed and clearly explained.
- 15/03/2004
- 18:22:11
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It was about a good idea to start with, but the grammar was horrible and the ideas were poorly expressed
- 13/03/2004
- 15:28:34
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.