A very interesting topic you have chosen to write about here. It's clear from the way you write this essay that you were interested in this topic aswell. It appears to be a very well reasearched and argued essay. You could have a very good debate on this topic because there are so many for's and against's.
- 06/03/2005
- 02:01:06
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Not really an essay. Nevertheless, it's nice to see that you have included a dictionary definition of sublimation along with some examples. I don't know why you have repeated yourself THREE TIMES. I take it these are three definitions are from three different dictionaries, books or whatever?. If so, then you should cite your sources (http://www.noodletools.com/quickcite/).In conclusion, there are some clear and well written definitions here. GOOD JOB!
- 06/03/2005
- 01:45:14
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I like how you have personalised this essay by using a personal opinion (your fathers opinion about the war. You can expand on the "domino theory" by talking about Senator Joe McCarthy and 'McCarthyism'. You need to watch out for spelling errors, Vietcong is one word!!!!.
- 05/03/2005
- 04:22:28
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I think you need to show more of your own opinion in this report. Nevertheless, you have made a good summary of the story and topped it all off with your own opinion in the last two paragraphs. I've read this story myself and I think that youve done a good job summarising the more important scenes of the novel.
- 05/03/2005
- 04:08:57
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Sorry about this guys. My essay should be titled:Finding The Empirical Formula of Magnesium Oxideand under the category 'Chemistry'
- 01/03/2005
- 07:05:39
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Theres only 20 mil people living with cancer? I would have thought that there would have been more... anyway a good essay that gets a well deserved smilee face from me. =)
- 21/10/2004
- 01:45:57
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This poem is very well written. I think you might have made 1 small error though.... "Won't have to here or feel any pain, in my sleep" do you mean hear?. But a very good poem.... good job ill give you a smilee face
- 13/09/2004
- 04:10:52
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
good use of vacabulary and well written =)
- 07/09/2004
- 04:32:10
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
good paragraph structure and well researched....
- 19/06/2004
- 04:48:00
- Score: 23 out of 23 people found this comment useful.
you have posted the same essay twice. It is a good essay though but i think the paragraphs are a bit too long.
- 17/06/2004
- 04:12:41
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
The three buildings are very well researched. You should try and start with an introduction rather than going striaght into the essay though. Maybe show us your citings aswell...
- 17/06/2004
- 04:09:09
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
lol, this essay is really weird
- 28/04/2004
- 03:38:33
- Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
yes this essay shows you know alot about condoms
- 23/04/2004
- 03:59:58
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I dont know how it fits in the catogary humanities. but i think it is very well written and very informative... and yeah its very good for an 8th grade student.
- 17/04/2004
- 00:30:12
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
very well researched and well written. I also like how you have refrenced youre sources.
- 16/04/2004
- 20:43:03
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.