When my time comes again,
I'll be ready once more.
Hope there won't be more pain,
Wish it won't turn out in another useless bore!
I wish of a place of better time,
Useless were the people I knew,
Where the bells, they chime,
I'll try to start anew.
Forgive my eternal sacrifice,
But by God it's living in paradise.
Feels as if my feelings are gripping me in a vice,
But it never turns out nice.
But I am becoming...
Dreadful and strong, beyond words of wrong.
I have Became..
My evils are always good and strong.
Of all the deeds I did,
I mostly regret,
Not being part of the becoming,
As everyone else thought I did.
Salvation from this foolish God's creation,
Living within a fool's nation,
Living Hell, my other disgration,
Awaiting countdown to annihilation!!
Praying for Salvation...
Salvation
Very examining with a dash of analysis and opiniated perspective.
Also great work on the inclusion of narrative techniques, thats what poetry is all about- great job!
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