It does seems to be true about our specific needs, however it should be stated that it is not necessarily our needs but the growing demands of the Earth's population. Nice paper
- 13/01/2005
- 02:55:59
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I think this might be a summary. However you do mention contrasting elements of love, and you should then mention what is it contrasting from early literature is so vague that it could be from any specific time era. Without this, a reader will get confused
- 13/01/2005
- 02:53:01
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if you want to use quotes from the bible to support yourself that is fine but also think about this. Do you noramlly live in a biblical lifestyle to the point where you can cast the first stone? The bible does say love all people equally. If you truely believ that GOd does exist and you feel the a gay union is bad then let God deal with them not you or any other that feel the need to slander. I am not religious and I wanted to point out that this is an issue that does come up in many philosphy classes.
- 05/11/2004
- 01:50:25
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
thank you VH1!. Just kidding. This was a nice essay on obviously your favorite rapper. Your urban language use adds a touch of flair that should have given you a well respected grade.
- 05/11/2004
- 01:44:20
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
What teacher in their right mind would assign this to you as an essay? Maybe for a final exam question or for a punishment... Although this is boring, it still is written well for your grade level. Also next time don't forget to cite resources.
- 05/11/2004
- 01:41:59
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
If we do this then we should also destroy great literature like A raison in the sun, and the color purple of and don't for get roots. Bad decision for any school
- 05/11/2004
- 01:38:14
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I think thos is exactly what this is and it is good. If every person grading this understands what this is then you might get a good score.
- 05/11/2004
- 01:33:46
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This was quite extensive in your research. But there were concepts that you did not extend on that might have been helpful. On reading about Freud I will say that a modern school text book just barely gets by by brushing his concepts. I think that there are books about each specific thing mentioned in the book, such as id, ego, and super ego. When I read most on Freud I sort of believe that he had the right concept to adhere to considering his time period. The oral fixation in kids is a given, babies explore with their mouths, and usually most babies have experienced frustration or being over fed- the parent can not tell what the baby is trying to say. But not all babies go on to beceom overeaters, argue, smoke, and bite nails. This gave me one strike for freud. The anal stage, every kid goes through it, and from my understanding if a perent does not apply toilet training with social ease then the child grows to be either anal retentive or anal expulsive which leads to obstinate behavior, stingy, disorderly or destructive behaviors. I am a parent of three and it is very hard to not want to push you child into doing the right thing. My first kid I waited until she was ready and man that took forever, so I guess I was lenient, my second I know I was harsh because I didn't want to go through the same thing as I did with the first. My third well I am hoping to go by his cues as well as giving a parentl push. This is another strike for Freud- how are parents to adequately know whe thay are too harsh or lenient?So if we passed the oral stage and if we passed the anal stage successfully then we have another chance to distrup the rest of our lives with the phallic stage. This starts around the age of 3-6. Non of my daughters went though this stage. it was more opposite my girls competed with their dads for my affection and still tried to be like me. My son on the other hand is showing interest of liking me more. I think that reason why it happened like this is because I am androgynous. So I think I can still assume male like position. But this was assessed after Freud's time and I know his Electra conflict did not give respect to androgynous. I am not sure if I should give him a strike or not. The genital stage is when most of the previous conflicts arise again. I am not sure if this is true. There isn't much said about it so maybe it is implied. When I was a teen I really wanted to be accepted by everyone and I was searching for long in all the wrong places. I think that is why it is said that women think of love as an emotion and men think of love as sex. When they mature love can not be defined or catagorized.
- 05/11/2004
- 01:27:20
- Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
This is a quite uninspiring and very blah paper. I know that this is mainly for research but this isn't any different than checking out a book on how to choose the best insurance.
- 05/11/2004
- 01:20:20
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Although some of your content is well put, I must add that President Bush does support the troops and has quite frequently visited naval ships, troops that are foreign deployed and support many military asseratations. Remember it is not about who wins or loses, only who is left.
- 05/11/2004
- 01:17:16
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is a great summary of conformity.
- 05/10/2004
- 00:56:54
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
It takes a big person to admits their faults and you have done so. Altough theis paper was average, it was good for your grade level. apologies on your 77
- 02/10/2004
- 21:21:41
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ok I have wrote this before. You stse in a few papers you are in high school and in others you are a shophomore in college. Which is it?? More importantly, This is not an A paper. I really hate to nit pick, but as a teaching assistant you should know this is not the work of a college sophomore, and EVERYTHING that you wrote was very typical of that of a Government textbook. This was probably a C paper if your professor was generous.
- 02/10/2004
- 21:20:00
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is a great experiment to tell why an infant cries.
- 02/10/2004
- 21:13:41
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
The biggest offset should be that A college senior wrote this paper but in the paper it is a person who has conducted studies for 30 years now and has collegues. Then there are passages that do not make any sense refering to music. This was about perception (sight) whihc later turns into olfactory (smell). The final thing is the copyright. Quoting william blake is one thing but using Walter Freemans work and citing it as your own is an outrage. I have his book. How can any professor that has graded this possibly missed these obivous attempts at cheating. How did this person get a 95%. I think this was copied from the WHfreeman internet site and pasted here and the person is using this as his own. People like you make it terrible for those that want to cite this paper as a resource.
- 27/09/2004
- 18:22:34
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Although this can be for Psychology, this is more for a Anatomy class.
- 12/09/2004
- 06:16:33
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Good summary on the teachings of Kant. He has supplied many of us a new meaning to philosophy
- 12/09/2004
- 06:13:08
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
In my speech class some did a speech on the same topic, but your is much better. In regards to what Blue Phoenix wrote. You do NOT have to take any sides if this is an informative speech. If this is a persuassive speech then yes, you should choose a side but also include the opposing side to gain strength to the speech. I think this is an excellent informative speech.
- 12/09/2004
- 06:04:09
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Ok I have noticed something. In your last paper, you claimed that you were a college junior, and in this one you are in High school in 13th grade. Which one is it? This paper is much better than the last one I reviewed by you. I would like to tell you though that the first paragraph is a glaringly obvious plagairizing use. As a psychology major and a junior in college I can say that this is not acceptable in any school. If you through up some quotation marks around it and then give the Bibliography on it to give credit where it is due then it would not be plagiarizing. But who is to assume that you will not give credit due Cheathouse if you use someone's work? Although it is a good paper, it is a defint terrible attempt to claim this as your own work. Lift up a pencil next time.
- 12/09/2004
- 05:55:34
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Although this was a very short summary, you had explained it well and supported your points. One thing to conside in your future writings, never write that you never got to finish it or see it all though its entirty. This looks as if the professor is completly incompetent, and even if he/she is do NOt throw it back in their face; That would be disrespectful.
- 12/09/2004
- 05:47:40
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"The phenomena that can be observed in charisma include -- the followers trust the correctness of the leader's beliefs, the followers feel affection to the leader and obey the leader willingly, and the followers feel an emotional involvement in the mission they are lead to do" This was an awesome passage! I have read many papers recently and yours is written well. Kudos.
- 12/09/2004
- 05:44:38
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I know college life can be stressful but this is not challenging for a college Sophomore to write an essay like this. You clearly state you point of view but in order to make your paper more persuassive you need to establish a thesis. Which brings me to question your grade of 99%. I highly doubt that is what you got on this paper. On another note why is your "Teacher" not professor asking "us" (the class) to write a paper on this subject? Many professors do NOT have an entire class write up an essay on the same topic. I hope in your future with Cheathouse, you submit better quality material; moreover, for your own benefit as a college student. OK face from me
- 12/09/2004
- 05:41:44
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I know that you are in tenth grade but this is good for your grade level. A few things to point out to you. Make a better thesis, and never write "In conclusion", that is redundant. For you thesis I would write "Road rage happens because of X, Y, and Z. then each oparagraph tells the reader about it and how it happens and why. This is witty and very appropriate. Kudos!
- 05/09/2004
- 07:11:13
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This is an extremely short essay for any college Junior. This almost looks as if you took as web article and cut and paste. What college do you go to because I am sure this was not acceptable in any class, and I am surprised that you got an 85% on it. There is a very weak thesis if there is one and the structure of this essay is Blah, vague. FOCUS, FOCUS, FOCUS! Also this is not a disease but a bilogical disorder. Try a little harder next time. I hate to see any college student fail.
- 05/09/2004
- 07:07:12
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This essay could improve itself a lot more it it were set up correctly.This looks more like an outline, and if it is it should be stated like one in the title. It sounds good and I do want to read about it but I can not.
- 05/09/2004
- 06:50:36
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.