I think that the essay's idea overall is pretty substantial. But I'd have to say the structure isn't that well organized.
- 29/06/2007
- 20:31:47
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
The essay portion is very good in terms of grammar and vocab. Personally I think this essay deserves a good score.
- 29/06/2007
- 20:24:58
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
The contents of the essay had many strong points to support the writer's idea.
- 27/06/2007
- 19:05:05
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
The essay shows many valid points and overall very informative.
- 29/11/2006
- 07:33:05
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Very good points and well support. However, I don't believe the writer can get A+ on this essay.
- 29/11/2006
- 07:26:53
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
The essay is very long and has great supports in the body.
- 28/11/2006
- 11:46:04
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I think the writer has made clear points.
- 28/11/2006
- 11:31:31
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Will becom a great essay if you provide more support information and examples.
- 27/01/2006
- 18:01:49
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.