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  • Comment

    This is a good topic with many resources. It is a relevant issue. Although, just like how the previous comment said, you should reconsider your title, such as "child abuse". As for the body, every paragraph you write must reinforce this idea: child abuse should be illegal. Try not to blend in your own bias opinions into the matter as much, otherwise the argument of your essay is great
    • 04/08/2007
    • 13:55:52
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  • Well Done

    The essay is neatly organized in the classical essay form. There is an introduction with a thesis and body paragraphs supporting the thesis ending with a conclusion at the end. There is a claim, evidence and elaboration for every body paragraph and each paragraph only focuses on a single claim that supports the thesis. It is easy to read and to understand.
    • 02/08/2007
    • 19:21:09
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Great!

    This is a great opening statement! Plenty of information and the correct format! I have to write one myself for law school as well and this essay will surely help me along the way! thanks
    • 06/06/2007
    • 22:34:17
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Improvement

    Your essay seems to be simply a copy and paste from some website and sources, it doesn't seem too original. First of all, if you would like to make it better, you should write stronger and better thesis statement. Then you should add a conclusion to the essay as well.
    • 06/06/2007
    • 00:58:59
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  • Well..

    Don't blame the males for not becoming teachers. The pay for teachers is just too little to support a family. A man needs a better paying job if he every wants to support a family. Therefore for females are teachers, its just a fun job for them.
    • 05/06/2007
    • 20:16:13
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  • Yea

    Yea well, people are always out there trying to do some good. This is definitely not the only place that needs saving. If we all do what we can, maybe the world would be slightly better off.
    • 05/06/2007
    • 20:04:45
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Yes

    I agree with your point that we should allow stem cell research to continue, but as you said, they must be closely monitored. How would you propose these scientists to be closely monitored? I mean of course they will be monitored, but who would make sure that the monitors are actually their job. In addition, what would they be monitoring anyways? Since the controversy is whether not stem cells should be used. If they are used, what are the monitors going to monitor? The good use of stem cells?
    • 05/06/2007
    • 19:54:49
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Looks Nice

    Very nice complementation of facts. To bad the charts didn't come out. Please try to create a more comprehensible essay next time.
    • 05/06/2007
    • 19:50:52
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Very nice

    Very full of information and statistics, but for some reason it looks more suitable for a slide show than for an essay.
    • 05/06/2007
    • 19:48:25
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Um..

    Good point on the negatives of society, but it is a bit short for a comprehensive argument. Please try to add more descriptions and supportive ideas.
    • 05/06/2007
    • 19:46:58
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Hm...

    PCDA seems like a very effective management technique to use, but the process you describes is still a bit confusing to me.
    • 05/06/2007
    • 19:45:25
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Fishing

    Very informative and disturbing.
    • 12/03/2007
    • 03:15:02
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Squid

    Very nice notes, but wouldn't qualify as a real essay. Need to put in paragraph format.
    • 12/03/2007
    • 03:13:13
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Very nicely detailed and written.
    • 11/02/2007
    • 21:37:58
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Sercive

    Very nicely written. I like the attitude you put into the essay. By the way, is this written for a college app?
    • 11/02/2007
    • 21:36:57
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Christmas

    Very nicely written? I learned much about christmas from this essay.
    • 11/02/2007
    • 21:33:55
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    Very nicely written. Very in depth analysis of St Francis as a mystic. He really did show the signs of the power of Jesus inside of him.
    • 11/02/2007
    • 21:26:24
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Hm..

    Um, kind of short and can be way better if went into more in depth analysis.
    • 11/02/2007
    • 21:24:57
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    Very nicely written with in depth knowledge of heretics and mysticism.
    • 11/02/2007
    • 21:21:09
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Um...

    This essay could be longer with better structure. If this was an essay really submitted at the grade of 10th, this shouldn't have recieved such high marks.
    • 11/02/2007
    • 21:20:03
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Teresa

    The reformation was really a very profound and exciting place, but I am not sure if the people really did all they could to make lives better for everyone.
    • 11/02/2007
    • 21:17:08
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Avila

    Very nice, it's very good to actaully find an essay about The Teresa of Avila, rather than mother Teresa. Since Teresa of Avila did have to endure much more suffering than the other Teresa.
    • 11/02/2007
    • 21:11:36
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Teresa?

    Dude, teresa was such a crazy woman. I only half believe what she really did.
    • 25/01/2007
    • 03:54:50
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Hm..

    Very nicely written, helped me understand the oil crisis much better.
    • 06/06/2006
    • 22:31:45
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  • Good

    Good opinions, but if you remove the 1st person views, it would be much better.
    • 06/06/2006
    • 22:28:50
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good stuff

    I enjoyed reading your essay really much, now I understand the logic behind hybids and such.
    • 06/06/2006
    • 22:22:26
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Energy

    Nice organization, but try to be more specific on the details.
    • 06/06/2006
    • 22:12:45
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Hm..

    A little too short, but I think the organization of the essay is really nice.
    • 06/06/2006
    • 22:10:02
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Crisis

    Very nicely written, but I think if you went into more detail, it would be more coherent and better.
    • 06/06/2006
    • 22:08:52
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Guns

    Are the scores of this essay wrong? This essay was very informative and I enjoyed reading it.
    • 06/06/2006
    • 19:17:33
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Lazers

    Good job, this will hopefully help me gain a better interest in lazers and physics.
    • 06/06/2006
    • 19:11:56
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Hamlet

    Well like all of other Shakespear works, there is always a moral ambiguity and the text is open to intrepretation, I mean if you actually look at the movies that are based on the book, they are all a little different, depending on the intrepretation of the director.
    • 06/02/2006
    • 22:50:03
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Very good

    Thnx. Really helped me understand what was really going on in the mind of Hamlet cause before I thought that Hamlet just kept overthinking everything.
    • 06/02/2006
    • 22:46:09
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Correct

    yea, you know what, I felt that Hamlet was a tragic hero too since he had the fatal flaw of procrastinating.
    • 06/02/2006
    • 22:43:56
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  • Cool

    Thanks, now I got something I can actually study off from cause shakespeare is very confusing indeed.
    • 06/02/2006
    • 22:40:57
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  • Um

    I'm thinking that a little more in depth anlysis would make the essay a whole lot better and smoother.
    • 06/02/2006
    • 22:36:54
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Very nicely written, yet try to tone down on the usage of "scolars". Just state the facts and get on with the topic.
    • 06/02/2006
    • 22:33:24
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Hamlet

    Thanks, this helped me way better than sparknotes, maybe because sparknotes is too long.
    • 06/02/2006
    • 22:29:55
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    Wow, this summary of Darwin's life really helped me better understand his life more easily than the other sites I had been searching through. Good job.
    • 18/01/2006
    • 01:41:02
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Confused

    Kinda confusing because no separation of ideas. The one huge paragraph is kinda threatening.
    • 18/01/2006
    • 01:37:41
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • To keir.

    nah..dont think the footnotes really matter, and if u really want to find the sources, just google the people and you can find them.
    • 17/01/2006
    • 22:35:13
    • Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Awakening.

    Very nicely written and indepth analysis. Helped me alot in better understanding the developments that Edna went through through her awakening spiritually and mentally.
    • 03/01/2006
    • 07:13:19
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • I know.

    I think what this essay needs is more evidence and less generalizations, then the essay might recieve a better score.
    • 03/01/2006
    • 06:18:31
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Hm..

    It's kinda short and very little analysis going on. Please do a more indepth analysis next time and less quotes since quotes don't explain themselves, you must explain the quotes.
    • 03/01/2006
    • 06:14:58
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Oedipus.

    This essay has a very in depth analysis of oedipus. I agree in many ways that oedipus is a tragic hero, but it may not be that oedipus has internal flaws. It seems as if Jocasta becomes one of Oedipus' flaws as well as she, herself, is too blind to lead her son.
    • 25/10/2005
    • 01:11:11
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  • Tragedy.

    The essay has good points, but it is a bit too "showing the obvious" I mean, its its obvious in the play, why still point it out? I understand where you are going in your essay, but i think some reediting woudl make the whole essay flow better.
    • 08/10/2005
    • 01:18:58
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Oedipus.

    I love your intro and the way you write in a professional view, not at all wishy-washy. No summarization of the story, since people who probably search for "fate" in oedipus already know the story.
    • 08/10/2005
    • 01:15:40
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Antigone.

    Try not to summarize the story if you are trying to analyze it. You are analyzing it and defining it, not to restate what people already know. Other than that flaw, the essay is fine.
    • 08/10/2005
    • 01:12:10
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Locke.

    I have learned much about Locke and his ways of governing, yet I still wonder why he chose propriety as a right instead of happiness.
    • 06/10/2005
    • 21:10:05
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Gov.

    Very nicely written. Very in depth analysis of the types of governign that exist and have existed in our world.
    • 06/10/2005
    • 21:08:37
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • One question.

    Are these supposed to be study notes? or are they just a list of facts?
    • 30/09/2005
    • 00:48:22
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Japan bombed eh?

    generally well written but try not to use first person view and tone down on the generalizations
    • 19/04/2005
    • 19:55:55
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Atomic bombing

    nicely written, i though u might have used a neutral tone considering that u r talking about both pro and con sides, but it seems that by using persuasion give a better effect on the reader
    • 19/04/2005
    • 19:28:31
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Thesis

    well it seems as if the title is the thesis, so technically maybe no thesis is needed after all
    • 19/04/2005
    • 19:23:26
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Very well

    nicely written. considering how recent this controversy is, you still managed to pull an outstanding essay, good job
    • 02/03/2005
    • 00:17:40
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Gatsby in Nick view

    good essay, but just wanted to point out the fact that you mentioned Nick changes before and after gatsby's death, yet you only used evidence from pgs 181 and 182. Your essay would be better developed if a wider range of evidence was used.
    • 12/02/2005
    • 22:27:30
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Hackers eh?

    nicely written, like your sense of humor that you inserted into the essay. very insightful.
    • 10/02/2005
    • 19:03:54
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Pirates

    hm...so the pirates were nicely protrayed in the pirates of the carribean! I mean they were dead, mean and dirty too. The thought of pirates disgusts me now...
    • 10/02/2005
    • 18:57:05
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Pirates!

    wow! ur essay surprised me when i read about how many people in asia actually pirate cds. Thats a huge number!very nicely written, with much evidence and support. good job
    • 10/02/2005
    • 18:49:44
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Piracy with economy

    good start. Try not to write in first person view. Would be better with some more development.
    • 10/02/2005
    • 18:42:16
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Red badge

    very well written. i dont know if its jsut me or not but i tried searchign for some of your quotes in the book and i couldnt find it, such as "from intercourse with his companions....allowed him" and other ones. try to put the page number next time yea? it would be very helpful to the readers. thanks
    • 06/01/2005
    • 17:12:22
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Color with henry

    i agree with aliaqa, theres just simply too many quotes and too less elaboration. though you have very much interesting facts noted, we, the readers, like to hear your point of view, not that of another's. but you managed to still make a good piece of writing though
    • 06/01/2005
    • 17:05:19
    • Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Henry in Red Badge

    very well written, but i think you should've added some information on how the colors and rehetorical devices that Crane used to describe Henry for emphasis, but overall it very good already
    • 04/01/2005
    • 16:56:45
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • New year

    very helpful and imformative but i think term "fai-hai" is actually "fa-chai" or it is according to my resources.
    • 02/01/2005
    • 19:16:20
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Huckleberry

    um, it seems like a good start but i think it need some more development
    • 21/12/2004
    • 14:24:21
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    inspiring and motivating! good job
    • 21/12/2004
    • 14:17:57
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Steriods

    nice, you got some very nice points in ur study notes, helps alot
    • 21/12/2004
    • 14:16:02
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Middle v high school

    yea but sometimes i woudl rather endure the rules rather than do hw. Though u get to pick classes in highschool, there are still required classes
    • 21/12/2004
    • 14:12:54
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Very nice..

    very nice....you know how to plagarize 100% in 9th grade.http://www.bookrags.com/notes/hf/PART1.htm
    • 23/11/2004
    • 16:11:44
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Hey!

    is it just me or does it feel like spammers are increasing on cheathouse?
    • 09/11/2004
    • 22:03:23
    • Score: 10 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
  • Pennies eh?

    yes i agree with the part that you cant buy anyhthing with pennies now-a-days, but if you had collected pennies, such as before pennies before the 1950, you can actually consider yourself rich. Believe it or not, a copper Lincoln penny from 1943 is actually worth a few ten thousands dollars. Though 1944 and 1942 pennies may not be worth as much as teh 1943 one, they are still worth quite a few bucks. You can probably get 10-20 bucks for each of those pennies.(if they are in good condition) Well, the pennies that are made now are only about 5% pure copper while the ones before were about 97% copper! Yea, so thats why pennies arent entirely wothless, it depends on which pennies you got in ur pocket!
    • 09/11/2004
    • 21:49:26
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Huckleberry & Jim

    Very well written. I especially enjoyed your conclusion. very inspirational.
    • 09/11/2004
    • 21:40:31
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Lol

    nicely written. Just try to tone down on your facts and try to increase your explainations. I especially like your title. "Who is your Daddy?" very catchy and funny.
    • 09/11/2004
    • 21:21:19
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • The powerful nature

    yes, Nature is powerful, and so is your writing. It is very inspiring. goodjob. keep up you creativity and perspective of nature!
    • 04/11/2004
    • 23:11:04
    • Score: 2 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Hm...

    yea, but there are always orginizations out there trying to suppress the african am. my history book doesnt even mention the Jim Crow laws!
    • 03/11/2004
    • 17:25:34
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    good facts and explanations, helps alot..thnx
    • 03/11/2004
    • 17:22:30
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Failure?

    there was too much resistance against the reconstruction, i think thats why the recon. had failed, just like you claimed. nice facts and supportive evidence.
    • 03/11/2004
    • 17:00:51
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Reconstruction

    yea...and the KKK also showed america that reconstruction would fail. I think that if there was actually a good plan, the KKK and other organiztation would see to it that the reconstruction failed.
    • 03/11/2004
    • 16:58:04
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • American recon.

    yea...i agree with "the beer barron", good start, but i think u'll need some more facts to support your claim
    • 03/11/2004
    • 16:51:15
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Uncle tom!

    very nicely written. what you wrote is better than what they have at sparknotes. Very powerful. the first time i read the book, i missed much of the points that u made, such as how this book to written to strike sympathy among the white and such. good job.
    • 21/10/2004
    • 19:50:12
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Marijuana

    yes, but doesnt like the people who take marijuana know that it is harmful to their heath, yet they just keep on taking it. also, dont you find it strange on how illegal marijuana keeps finding its way into the US when the border guards are supposed to check for illegal drugs?
    • 19/10/2004
    • 21:24:39
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Technology, the next tyrant?

    yea, i agree with u. new advancements in tech. are "supposed" to make things easier and more exciting for humans, yet they make us lose our past and values. I believe that these technologies are also taking away our beliefs of religion too.
    • 19/10/2004
    • 21:19:53
    • Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • The nerd, the jock, and the average

    good writing, pretty convincing. yes, i kinda agree that it wouldbe very difficult for the average person to amount to anything signaficant, but they can still try cant they?
    • 19/10/2004
    • 21:15:53
    • Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Dollar

    and here i was once believe that the pictures and symbols on the dollars were just pictures to make the money more difficult to counterfeit!but i got one question, how did a german word become an english word for money?(dollar)
    • 19/10/2004
    • 21:08:45
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Plagarized...

    of course its plagarized...didnt think that you could invent a menu all by yourself...http://www.drugs-plaza.com/recipes_honey_brownies.htmall you did was add a paragraph...but you didnt list scource...there it qualifies for plagarisism... not like this "essay" is anyuse to anyone anyways...where u gonna get marijuana butter? From Save-On? From Raplhs? I dont think so. Not from any supermarket I bet.
    • 30/09/2004
    • 01:32:56
    • Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Suicide poem

    Yea...well I didn't exactly meet someone who committed suicide, but I know someone who's suicidal. That person actually lived in a mental institute for like a week in a year. Anti-depressin drugs actually make u more depressed(or thats wut I heard from that person) yea...nice poem, has a ring of pathos in it. Nice.
    • 28/09/2004
    • 20:24:21
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Cannot find

    very nice poem. the first part of the poem seems to be fast paced and near the end of the poem, the pace slows down. Nice effect on ur poem.
    • 28/09/2004
    • 20:19:17
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • About a place...

    nice...you have very much discriptive words in it(which hopefully it does since is it a discriptive essay!) i really enjoyed your close attention to detail and your diction gave me a feeling of nostalgia. good work!
    • 28/09/2004
    • 20:16:26
    • Score: 1 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    "18 shots of liquid sin" I know the phrase symbolizes something, yet I can not pinpoint it. Very well written thou. Very well.
    • 26/09/2004
    • 17:59:23
    • Score: 5 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Just a little longer.

    hm...well vampire-chick, u may have not been confused, but I got confused a bit. May be its just me. I dunno. It seems as if day is passing, yet I'm not sure. I'm not critisizing the poem, I just dont really understand it.
    • 26/09/2004
    • 15:15:41
    • Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Lost

    yea, i got some of the smae feelings when i get lost too. its this panic that overwhelms you causing you to momentarily forget where you are and what you are doing. people always tell me to remain calm, but i guess it doesnt really work.
    • 19/09/2004
    • 23:35:00
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Advertising

    yes, there is stereotying in advertisements, but without the glamorous people wearing brand clothes or celebrities using products in advertisements, who would go buy the products? Only this way can advertisers increase their flow of customers.
    • 19/09/2004
    • 23:24:32
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • People Switch

    you know, "if" is a big word. I can probably bet that if Bush ever knew that your aim is to replace him in the office, he would do anything in his power to stop you. (like he is doing to Kerry) but i appreciate your goals and aims. hope you fare well!
    • 19/09/2004
    • 23:14:39
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Gladiator

    wow...didnt know that there were so many false details in the moive. i was expecting it to be based on more facts, but i guess if the movie was mostly based on facts, it would've been pretty much boring and would attract a smaller audience. Well the fiction part of the movie really made gladiator more exciting.
    • 19/09/2004
    • 23:06:05
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Photosynthesis

    nicely written. it helped me alot understanding about the energy intake and stuff. It would've helped if there were some pictures to look at or sumthing cause the ATP and other stuff is pretty confusing.(or maybe its just me)
    • 19/09/2004
    • 23:00:08
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • AP Vocab

    Nicely written. You got most of the important people and their purposes. Helps alot. Wow...u took US AP in 10th grade? dont people usually take it in junior year?
    • 14/09/2004
    • 19:58:05
    • Score: 0 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Mocking bird

    try to tone down the quotes a bit and give some more supportive sentences. overall its good but some of your quotes are really long. when I read your essay, I somewhat felt as if I were reading parts of the book at a time. I know you know the facts, but what does the facts all mean? To say the truth, your quotes seem long than ur explaination/supportative sentences.
    • 05/09/2004
    • 11:21:57
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Dreams

    well...spoonman does have a point in the dreams part, yet most, if not all, people have the dream to fall in love, get married, and live a good life. Well who doesnt want to life a good life? But, in this essay, this is not only about dylan has such a dream, but how the dream came true(well parts of it) It does seem that spoonman is a little extreme
    • 26/08/2004
    • 22:47:22
    • Score: 2 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Matrix

    im sure the examples are great but when the readers dont understand wuts goind on...nothign gets across. i got very confused by reading ur passage and hope u would attempt to do better next time
    • 19/08/2004
    • 22:49:54
    • Score: 3 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Last Mile

    Nice title and verys descriptive stroy. The story actually gave me the goosebumps at the end of the story. How did u get a 99% on this when u actually derserve more that 200%! Even some published work isnt as good as ur story.
    • 19/08/2004
    • 21:57:38
    • Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Caeser

    very nicely written with much detail. I have read Julius Caesar by Shakespear but it seems that Caesar's character did not really depict his true character. This really helps me understand more about Caesar!
    • 19/08/2004
    • 16:19:38
    • Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Bus

    Nice...what can i say? Very imaginitive. Like that nice ending where it comes suddenly to the reader. I guess you just dont want to mess w/ black dudes.
    • 30/07/2004
    • 20:46:00
    • Score: 2 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Test

    good essay with lost of supporting evidence. Just one thing, i guess the site couldnt read ur symbols or sumthing cause i dont get wut "<Tab/&gt" "Clear&lt" "Light pink/purple&lt" and other error looking things are supposed to be
    • 23/07/2004
    • 20:46:07
    • Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Pain inside of me

    nicely written. Full of spirit and emotions. Appeals to the feelings of others. Sound like a poetry though.
    • 23/07/2004
    • 20:32:55
    • Score: 7 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Right to Suicide?

    Yes, in many cultures people become ashamed and would flee the country if they ever learned that one of their relatives have suicided. Some people believe that sucides must be prevented and that the people who do suicide have mental problems. Yet, I dont believe that there is anything wrong with the person, jsut that the person might have experienced more tramatic experiences than that of the average person, therefore due to stress they suicide. Well, in the past though, depending on how one suicided, one may become honored or despised. If one sacrifices for a God or one kills himself(herself) in a war to avoid becoming a POW, they are both honored for that.
    • 10/07/2004
    • 20:46:14
    • Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Dreams

    True and nicely written. Good examples. Yet, there are many ways to interpret a dreams. Dreams are usually not what they seem to be. If you do wish to further explore the meaning of dreams, you may want to borrow a dream dictionary from a library. Also, a dream may seem harmless to the dreamer, yet according to some dream intrepretors, even harmless looking clouds in dreams may predict future misfortunes.
    • 10/07/2004
    • 20:37:45
    • Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Mocking bird

    good quotes and support. Your evidences and conclusion really gives a final thought. Nicely written!
    • 02/07/2004
    • 15:46:36
    • Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    this is one of ur best works yet!
    • 12/06/2004
    • 18:00:36
    • Score: 20 out of 26 people found this comment useful.
  • Damned

    the repitition if the phrase "damned creature" really gives effect to the poem
    • 12/06/2004
    • 17:58:36
    • Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Pain

    weird but nice...that all i can say
    • 12/06/2004
    • 17:53:29
    • Score: 11 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
  • Who'm i?

    interesting and inspiring. Produces vivid pictures to the reader, and yet gives a sense of reality
    • 12/06/2004
    • 17:44:04
    • Score: 19 out of 23 people found this comment useful.
  • Technology in WWI

    nicely written, bout could've been better if you told which countries developed which weapons. As such, Gremany and Great Britain were the only ones with the tanks. Also, what happened to sybmarines? You never mentioned that, therefore you have left out and important factor of WWI, wich was Germany's Unrestriced Submarine Warfare. In addition, wasn't fighter airplanes invented too? Though it did not play a vital role in WWI, it is still a technological advance.
    • 31/05/2004
    • 18:58:14
    • Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Oil

    very well written. Gives lots of facts and supports thesis. Nice collection of sources in ur appendix too! I guess the rising oil factor is unavoidable, as so it is happened now as we speak! Hopefull ythe prices would die down once again or we'll find a way to use solar powered vehicles.
    • 23/05/2004
    • 22:10:44
    • Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • To diamondize1

    paragraph 6 only say that he survived the plane crash, not how. It gives no concrete detail. Then it goes on about how he survived in the wilderness after he sruvived the plane crash. In the whole essay, only one sentence bring up the topic of the plane crash and that sentence only states that he sruvived, not how or why.
    • 22/05/2004
    • 16:30:21
    • Score: 3 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Sword of Ata

    Nice ending! The chat with the witch and the merchant was throughly writting. Still, it would have been better if there were some challenges along the way to the palace. Good Job!
    • 20/05/2004
    • 16:06:39
    • Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Hatchet

    The story line is way in wack. You need to put the order of the ideas in chronological order first. Then you need to explain the stituations. For example, "he survives the plane crash." What plane crash? Why did the plane crash? How did the plane crash?
    • 20/05/2004
    • 16:00:47
    • Score: 6 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Flies Lord

    Try to stop changing the tense of the essay from past to present. very descriptative and give clears examples of the children changing from good to evil.
    • 19/05/2004
    • 19:02:24
    • Score: 2 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Julius Caesar

    Try to separate your two body paragraphs into 4. Right now, it looks very long, and very few people enjoy reading very long essays. Good quotes and explanations though.
    • 18/05/2004
    • 18:39:03
    • Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • World's bottom

    nice short story, but it feels incomplete. Hope you finish it soon!
    • 18/05/2004
    • 18:32:25
    • Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Racism in Mocking Bird

    Good intro. Still, you should try not to just list all the facts. You need to explain more for each fact given. Other than that, good work.
    • 18/05/2004
    • 18:27:52
    • Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • "a la matrix"

    you have great imagination, but in the first section of the story, you randomly switched from first person to second person, which was awkward. overall, good; but I had a hard time following the story. You lost me after the part where he wakes up and a sick bay.
    • 18/05/2004
    • 18:22:08
    • Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Kentucky kitchens

    Couldnt have said it better myself. You said all that was needed to be said about your tour.
    • 17/05/2004
    • 22:39:41
    • Score: 7 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Two Kids

    Nice. You have made the dog into a wild beast that doesnt rest until it has quenched his thrist for blood. You also have the ability to create clear pictures of the story for the reader's mind. Keep up the work!
    • 17/05/2004
    • 22:34:17
    • Score: 13 out of 17 people found this comment useful.
  • Rising Dark

    hm..i think that your synopsis of the book can be longer, for it doesnt tell enough of the book to actually make you want to read it. other than that, good job!
    • 17/05/2004
    • 22:28:46
    • Score: 16 out of 20 people found this comment useful.
  • Er..

    now that interesting...never would have wondered about this if it had not been one of the best essays there is to be found. Who knew that, and i quote, "the sperm must be present in the oviduct after the first few hours of ovulation." So, its has to be only a few hours before....
    • 17/05/2004
    • 22:24:17
    • Score: 1 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Heroism

    very descriptive and give lots of examples. Though i never saw the movie "Antz" before, it sounds like "A Bug's Life, in which an ant named Flik goes on a journey to save his coloney even though he was once sunned by his colony.
    • 15/05/2004
    • 18:44:02
    • Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Diets

    Wow, never knew so much about diets. I never knew that some diets actually work while others just makes u think that ur getting skinner. So, never use Fad Diets!, they just give u the illusion that its working, but its not the real thing
    • 15/05/2004
    • 18:39:22
    • Score: 3 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • To cafedeglamour

    Hello! read the title. This essay is not about how Macbeth went to his downfall. Rather why he is a "Tragic Hero." There is a difference. Also, we all differ in our opinions, so you can write an essay about his personality flaw. While, ambition leads to becoming a tyrant. Tyrants are created by power greedy people. ex. ceasar, hitler, etc.... I am not stating that ur wrong, just you might want to expand your views a bit.
    • 24/03/2004
    • 19:39:33
    • Score: 3 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    this is like the first poem i have seen in cheathouse.com. You shuld really create a title for this poem to create a better effect. *ack...i cant think of any suggestions for the title rite now. ill get back to u when i think of one....good poem by the way, better than most i read
    • 24/03/2004
    • 01:48:40
    • Score: 4 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Frisbie

    wow. nice detailed version of the history of frisbies. i mean, i never knew roman soldiers threw their shields like a frisbie as a weapon! (with a bit of humor in it) Also, the history of the frisbie sound like a very smooth evolution.
    • 23/03/2004
    • 19:50:48
    • Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Happiness

    needs more descriptive words. this essay gives mostly examples and facts. It is a pretty goot essay, just that, I as the reader, feels that something is missing...
    • 23/03/2004
    • 19:45:23
    • Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • "We love to see you smile"

    Very nicely written. Powerful. Just like any one of Amy Tan's works about migration. The only exception is that this is more enjoyable!
    • 23/03/2004
    • 19:37:32
    • Score: 10 out of 16 people found this comment useful.
  • Shotguning a beer

    Yes. There are also other games you can play with drinking beer instead of just betting on who can drink the most. There were some online, (in which i am terribly sorry i forgot the link), but u can make up ur own games! such as singing or spin the bottle to see who has to pay for the next round, etc
    • 23/03/2004
    • 19:28:17
    • Score: 6 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • 1984

    There are some ways u can improve ur essay by explaining what techniques the government of 1984 used to control the people, such as the people were forced to watch their television, for it cannot be turned off, giving the people propanganda 24/7 and the ways of torture the party used to eliminate people who attempt to have their own opinions, such as Wilson. Also, you missed the point that there are thought polices everywhere, big brother, junior spies, and anti-sex leagues.
    • 23/03/2004
    • 19:20:46
    • Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Madness

    yes, very true. but for some reason i think this essay fits better under a different catagory. ~just my opiniongood diction though!
    • 23/03/2004
    • 19:10:00
    • Score: 19 out of 24 people found this comment useful.
  • Creative story

    Very interesting, but it is also confusing at the same time. in the first story, are you the girl? or what?these also remind me of short poems. good job
    • 22/03/2004
    • 23:57:16
    • Score: 11 out of 16 people found this comment useful.
  • Navy Training

    The "Hell week" you mentioned. Isnt it also called "Boot Camp"?(they actually had a reality show about people in boot camp)~for more info about the us navy, go tohttp://www.navy.mil/
    • 22/03/2004
    • 23:23:56
    • Score: 7 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Abortion

    Technically, in abortion, it is the killing of cells. Therefore, we can not entirely say that we are killing people when we abort, for it is destroying the developing fetus. For example, bacteria is a living thing. Just that they kill other living cells, when we destroy these harmful cells, do we feel remorse? No. It is just a way of life. But just to be safe, dont do sex until you become an adult and believe that you can handle having children.
    • 22/03/2004
    • 23:19:03
    • Score: 22 out of 29 people found this comment useful.
  • Robespierre

    this essay is some-what short. It mostly give quotes of Reobespierre but doesnt define what they mean and (historical error) Robespierre lost his head with many of his followers, they did not arrest him. The soldier Merda shot him durning the aressting of Robespierre.
    • 22/03/2004
    • 23:01:47
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Hm...

    For mor einfo on Robespierre, check out the book "Reobespierre Portrait of a revoltuionary democrat" by george rude, or if you need to write robespierre and the reign of terror, check out "Paris in Terror" by stanley loomis~these books shuold be at ur public library
    • 22/03/2004
    • 22:56:11
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Childhood

    It seems as if childhood experience would greatly influence people in later life. People may say that is does not, but when people are still young, what they experience is what they believe in, especially if their parents constantly talk to them about such matters.
    • 22/03/2004
    • 22:47:40
    • Score: 6 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
  • Young Children

    'Tis true, 'tis true. It is a common belief that girls mature more faster than guys do, therefore the girls are more ready to accept the masculine toys than guys are ready to accept feminine toys. But as immature children as we all once were, we may have believed that the opposite gender has "cooties" and that was probably one of the reasons why males dont play with female toys, but I believe that females see to it as a young age that "cooties" dont exist. But dont take my word for it!
    • 22/03/2004
    • 22:40:34
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Stereotype!

    The past views of Females is verys bad. It is good that we have finally learned that "all people are created equal." Some people may not still accept the fact that women are equal to men, to this I tell them,"HELLO!! This is the present. If you don't like women, then you should be treated the way you treat them!"
    • 22/03/2004
    • 22:29:24
    • Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Very True

    Alchohol and sex should never be mixed. By the way, isn't it illegal to drink under 21? Parents should be more careful where they leave their alchohol if they would like their children not drink. Impairing judgement indeed!P.S. A note to parents of teenagers: Keep Your Alchohol Locked Up At All Times!
    • 22/03/2004
    • 22:19:03
    • Score: 1 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Not entirely true

    Not ALL fathers would see sex as a blessing thing to have. Some may naver even have children and be content. You never know if it is the women that sees sex as a great thing. Recent studies have shown that man and sex are in the brain while women think more about feelings and how they are affected by different events. Therefore it may not be the man's fault for thinking of sex, for it is a biological thing. And everyone if different, therefore everyone thinks differently.
    • 22/03/2004
    • 22:11:57
    • Score: 5 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • I agree

    Sex edu. should be taught in school, and most high schools already require a half-year course in "health & safety" which talks about premature sex and why it is wrong and bad. But, if we see premature sex as a bad thing when we are young, we would grow up to accept the fact that it is wrong, not the other way around.
    • 22/03/2004
    • 22:04:45
    • Score: 8 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • EVIL!!!!

    So the OPEC are really evil? They have invested in only oil trade, increasing the price of oil more than three times its original price. They sound almost like a tyrant.
    • 22/03/2004
    • 21:48:00
    • Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Insightful

    Very insightful. If we do have an oil crisis, why dont we all switch to electricity. Such as electric cars and such? The oil is getting more expensive as the years pass too.
    • 22/03/2004
    • 21:42:10
    • Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Very nice

    very insightful and detailed. gives many examples to support point. leaves no points about the reign of terror missed out.
    • 13/03/2004
    • 20:05:39
    • Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Insightful

    This essay gives detailed examples about the reign of terror. For those who are writing need heads up about the reign of terror should read this essay. Also facts relating to Robespierre are here, but the essay gives more attention to the Reign of Terror.
    • 13/03/2004
    • 19:50:51
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.