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  • Alcoholism

    A great essay on a subject that has indeed affected so many peoples lives as johnijp pointed out. Good work. Keep it up.
    • 12/09/2007
    • 07:46:47
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Whistle blowing.

    A really good essay, very informative and some good informative quotes. Well done.
    • 15/09/2005
    • 08:53:34
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Civil War in China.

    Brilliant bibliography and a fantastic essay.
    • 13/09/2005
    • 22:19:07
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • The management techniques used to combat desertification near Beijing.

    Wow you really know your stuff....well researched and well done x.
    • 13/09/2005
    • 22:10:48
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Is the Huankantou incident the beginning of the end of communist rule in China?

    My you go by a few different nameshttp://pekingduck.org/mt/mt-comments.cgi?entry_id=2350
    • 13/09/2005
    • 22:05:31
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • My continued complete refutation of the Bible verse by verse: Leviticus

    Did you write this too? http://www.skepticsannotatedbible.com/lev/abs_list.html
    • 13/09/2005
    • 21:52:39
    • Score: 0 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • An optimistic look at the future fuel crisis.

    Is this yours on here? If so it's very good and you have a very good view on the subject and very good knowledge.http://pekingduck.org/archives/002285.php
    • 13/09/2005
    • 21:33:24
    • Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • What is organizational culture?

    Very good study notes I found them helpful. Thank you.
    • 13/09/2005
    • 20:43:10
    • Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • What makes you better than me

    A very nice discriptive and informative essay. I don't know if it's the same with you but I have a lways been taught not to have questions in essays as it stops the reader from reading and makes them think about what question you're asking.Excellent presentation I like it
    • 11/04/2005
    • 13:52:38
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Types of bulling

    Ok quite good...only in your introduction you stated that there were 4 types of bullying;verbal, physical, mental, or emotional. However in the main body of the text, you have only described two forms.Some bullying can also be to do with diverse cultures. People believeing in different things, which is known as racism. This can be another form of bullying.Very good though and it shows you have a good knowlege about the subject you are writing about.
    • 11/04/2005
    • 05:58:07
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Refutation of the Bible

    Well thats me burning in hell because of my tattoo's...oh well.Very good, you sure have a very good knowledge of the bible...did you have to write this for an assignment or is it just for fun? I do like it though.
    • 11/04/2005
    • 05:38:17
    • Score: 1 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Egypt

    Hi thereI totaly agree with 'Keir' below in the way that you really need to reference your statements. Also I think it is a good idea to read through out loud a piece of work, or get someone else to proof read it as I found a lot of bits in this essay didn't make sense.Other than that I think it has a lot of vey descriptive points but again they do need evidence to back them up.However the presentation of this essay I think is very good.
    • 11/04/2005
    • 05:24:03
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Pride and Predjudice

    I think ou can take pride in this essay. Very well done
    • 11/04/2005
    • 05:12:38
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • History of Pornography and Safe Sex

    Great essay. I totally agree with your conclusion....well done x
    • 06/04/2005
    • 20:49:22
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • The Lottery

    Again another good piece. Very discriptive and informative. I enjoy reading your work.Keep it up
    • 06/04/2005
    • 11:24:20
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Wrestling over Civil Right's during Reconstruction.

    Well done with this. It's a nice short but informative piece which gives it viewers an insight into this topic.Good work
    • 06/04/2005
    • 11:20:42
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Gynecological Problems at a Young Age

    I became very emotional after reading this as I have had similar experiences and, like you said, 'when your young you think you are invincible' well I thought this way when I was young having many problems and never seeking help.The bit about doctors sending you away with nothing wrong, happened to me also, and they missed an ectopic pregnancy I was 10.5 weeks and nealy died.If I knew what I knew now, then I would have gone to my GP earlyer and then maybe I would be able to have children today.Still I hope your piece informs the younger generation to seek medical advice about anything that worries them.Good luck to you and best wishes x
    • 27/02/2005
    • 22:14:15
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Love Vs. Infatuation

    Although it is short, and does not go into great deapth, I really took pleasure in reading this (as I thought I had never been in love)I always considered my self as being in lust with most of my boyfriends and husband, but after reading this I know that I do love him after all.Thank you for this insight.
    • 27/02/2005
    • 21:37:19
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Health promotion

    I found this to be extreemly helpful to me as I am just about to write a critiical assignment on health promotion.Your writing was very informative and benefical to those studying in this area.Clearly you have the knowledge about this subject as you have shown in your writing skills.Fantastic, and well done x
    • 27/02/2005
    • 21:08:13
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • 'Interest Groups In The Policy Process'

    From reading all of your work it clearly shows that you understand what you are writing about. Very goo references which back up all of your quotes and evidence.Well done on all your essays and keep up the good work...can't wait for more.
    • 27/02/2005
    • 20:55:18
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • A Family In Crisis

    A good essay, having done similar essays myself, I found this very interesting.Well done
    • 27/02/2005
    • 20:50:29
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Brilliant

    Very informative and descriptive. Great references which I am off to check out now for my course. Keep up the good work...well done x
    • 27/02/2005
    • 20:02:50
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Diseases

    Enjoyed reading this, gives the reader an insight to the disease and an understanding. Although as johnjjp has suggested some references would have been usefull for further research. Anyway well done x
    • 27/02/2005
    • 19:56:03
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Fantastic

    I have printed this off as it has given me loads of ideas for my current university course. Thanks x
    • 27/02/2005
    • 19:52:12
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Clone

    I like this different approach I found this interesting. Although I did have trouble reading it and read it over 2 or three times untill it sunk in.
    • 27/02/2005
    • 19:48:54
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    I like that you have put notes on here as it helps others like myself to study. Thankyou x
    • 27/02/2005
    • 19:44:35
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Ruskipaul

    Thanks for your comment what would you write as intro and conclusion that is not so casual? Help i need ideas x
    • 18/02/2005
    • 20:38:03
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Ruskipaul

    Thanks for your comments, I have noted what you have said and there is a dramatic change in my next essay. Just waiting for the mark from my tutor now...........wonder what he's gonna think lol.
    • 18/02/2005
    • 20:24:02
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Modernism

    I like this. It had me gripped to read more by the opening statement and a good short essay.
    • 18/02/2005
    • 20:15:10
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Power

    Whats wrong with my comment at the bottom? Was only telling the truth that I really liked this essay as I have done a similar essay to this myself, only mine is focused around careing for the elderly and not children. On comparrison this one is a hell of a lot better than mine.Thats why I wrote "love it Well done"!
    • 18/02/2005
    • 10:04:54
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • English

    I think personally that I would have liked to have seen a more detailed introduction, maybe a little somthing about how old you were when you moved for example.Still, I enjoyed reading this and I think that you have done very well with your English which you have proved at the end of your writing, with the words that you have chosen to use. You now clealy have a good understanding of the English languge and the punctuation rules.Keep it up. Well done x
    • 18/02/2005
    • 09:47:41
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Ocupation

    I enjoyed reading this although I really do dislike dentists. I have to be sedated for the most minor work on my teeth. (Child Hood horror story. Anyway I thought this was very discriptive and put's the reader in the lime light of the work carried out.If it is this kind of work which you enjoy I think you will be very compassionate toward your patents and good at your job.Good work keep it up.
    • 18/02/2005
    • 09:34:46
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Great

    I'm studying Goffman at the moment and I am intrugued to look at his other work now I have read your essay. Nice one.
    • 22/01/2005
    • 18:20:52
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Herbs

    I really like this will help me a lot in my work. Thanks
    • 22/01/2005
    • 18:13:36
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Othello

    One thing sorry should have put this in before, referencing within the writing could be a little shorter. I don't know how you were taught to reference so maybe you are right but I always thought that if you are continuesly referencing the same act and scene you only need to quote the line numbers. Then at the end of the essay the reference should have from line to line number. Sorry if this is no help to you.x
    • 22/01/2005
    • 18:05:15
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Othello

    I think this is fine.(Better than I could do) Not sure if it needs much work tho xxxxxxxx
    • 22/01/2005
    • 17:59:57
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Fantasic

    Kept me glued till the end. Excellent writing.
    • 22/01/2005
    • 17:56:37
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Great

    Love it well done. Really interesting through out.
    • 22/01/2005
    • 17:46:50
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Sarah L

    Thanks for your comments, they have helped. I do normally write up an essay plan but I find it difficult to stick to it. I know what u mean about how it flows. Am in the process of a second essay and have taken your advice. Thankyou so much. x
    • 13/12/2004
    • 15:26:50
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Gay Cat

    I didn't like this. I don't think that using swear words in essays is a vey good idea. Perhaps you could have refrased the kitty litter bit! A nice sense of humour though x
    • 13/12/2004
    • 15:22:30
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • American family

    I like your style and I enjoyed reading this. I do however agree with a couple of other viewers about your referencing. It's always nice to reference so other people who are interested can view the source then may be pick up other things from the information you give. If ya get the jist. Well done n e way.(And i didn't copy this from n e one this was my own interpretation of the essay I have read. I would have written this even if I hadn't seen anyone elses comments.)
    • 13/12/2004
    • 15:12:36
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Racism

    Have also done a paper on this subject. I just wish I had read your before doing it. Verry well done andexcellent references which will come in handy thanks x
    • 29/11/2004
    • 18:20:16
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Power abuse

    Love it....Well done!
    • 29/11/2004
    • 18:17:18
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • PLEASE???????????????

    Please leave me any comments I need some advice on how to improve my writing style. Possitive comments are much apreciated although I would like some helpfull hints if anyone has any.
    • 29/11/2004
    • 18:09:06
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Coppied

    Word for word fromhttp://depressionfaq.com/q12.html
    • 29/11/2004
    • 17:51:15
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Nursing homes

    I like your out-look on nursing homes and like your style of writing. Obviously nursing homes are different in England. I have been to a lot of different homes, as I was worked for an agency and none of them do what you describe. A few were very nice places to work and 1 or 2 did provide activities but were not consistant with these. I think that residential homes are more along the lines of what you describe and many nursing homes these days are for people who need nursing care and very rarely have able boddied people residing there. However I think this is a good essay although I didn't like the retorical question at the end but thats just me. Well done.
    • 29/11/2004
    • 17:42:23
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Long Term Care

    Great essay. Enjoyed reading it.
    • 29/11/2004
    • 17:31:27
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Sudden Death

    Loved your essay!
    • 29/11/2004
    • 17:29:36
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Hospice

    Fantastic. Thankyou for giving me an insight to hospices and the way that they are run. This has become extreemly usefull as i am currently studying this at uni.
    • 15/11/2004
    • 18:29:19
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Report

    This report was from a project which was done on the internet. It's about how easy it is to find care information on the wb. It is supposed to be a report to an employer who asked what the project was about and how it would be beneficial to other mebers of care staff.
    • 15/11/2004
    • 18:17:15
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Lord of the rings

    Very well written and nicely discriptive.
    • 15/11/2004
    • 18:12:44
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    I liked this, but not only is it wrong for medical reasons but mother nature creates all the diseses to stop an overpopulated world and if cloning were legal then this would stop and the world would implode with the weight from all the people. Thats my theory anyway. Great writing skills
    • 14/11/2004
    • 17:41:17
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Gone with the wind

    Loved the film and loved this. Well done.
    • 14/11/2004
    • 17:33:36
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Fantastic

    I agree with johnjjp on this one I do think your essay deserved more than 80% well done.
    • 14/11/2004
    • 17:30:27
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • SarahL

    Thankyou for your kind comment. It's much aprieciated.
    • 14/11/2004
    • 17:26:32
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Thoroughly Enjoyed

    Need i say more!
    • 14/11/2004
    • 17:24:47
    • Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Very Brief

    I think it needs a bit more on the subject. Some punctuation and paragraphs here and there would have been nice too. Still it is intersting.
    • 14/11/2004
    • 17:19:16
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Great

    Fantasic loved it. Well done!
    • 14/11/2004
    • 17:15:23
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Great

    I really enjoyed reading this. Good work keep it up
    • 26/10/2004
    • 15:28:24
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Last duchess

    I enjoyed reasing this and although I heve never read this I feel that by reading your work I know what it is all about. Great work
    • 26/10/2004
    • 15:19:21
    • Score: 62 out of 71 people found this comment useful.
  • Euthanasia

    I agree with SarahL, that the essay is verry anti-euthanasia. It would've been nice to see some positive points for the subject rather than just negative.I have always been taught to argue the points for and against in any essay, although some times I don't, as I find it hard if I strongly believe something.However a very good piece of writing.
    • 25/09/2004
    • 02:24:24
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.