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  • Abortion

    u're quite talanted and its good that u're putting it to use...this poem was a huge eye opener and will always have this effect on its readers
    • 23/08/2005
    • 11:25:39
    • Score: 6 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Awesome

    Great job...very interesting, u have a great style of writing along with an awesome imagination. keep it up
    • 14/07/2005
    • 12:39:20
    • Score: 18 out of 20 people found this comment useful.
  • Brilliant

    this paper is well structured and u simply did wat u had to do...well done
    • 14/07/2005
    • 12:33:26
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Sweettt

    Hey i liked this paper. I think it was 'awesomely' written and it gives the reader a great sense of knowledge of what's actually happening.Good job
    • 29/06/2005
    • 14:17:58
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Kerry

    Hey guys this is my second essay here i hope it gets in. um please guys comment on and rate my essay *even if u think it stinks* tell me the areas in which i could bursh up on and so on...
    • 28/06/2005
    • 20:07:56
    • Score: 10 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
  • This is enlighting

    This summary is really interesting.I like the way you capture your reader's interest in this poem...keep it up
    • 20/06/2005
    • 21:54:31
    • Score: 26 out of 34 people found this comment useful.
  • HEY

    Well Done G...
    • 18/03/2005
    • 07:43:22
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • G00d essay

    Hey good job John.Hope u follow in the footsteps of Johnnjjp ( the reigning hero of this site)LOL!
    • 10/03/2005
    • 20:02:11
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Helpful

    This was really helpful, thanks alot!
    • 26/02/2005
    • 11:35:12
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good essay

    I like this essay...i like your structure and format, not perfect but good and interesting Work on the simple errors but,...keep it up.well done
    • 13/02/2005
    • 14:24:12
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Another winner.!!!

    Its also brilliant. You use your words wisely and display them so well. it is a brilliant essay, as are your others, but this one has more depth and meaning, well done!this really is fantastic, u did a great job! i really like this essay, its breath taking, it was soo amazing to read. i really think out did ur self this time John!
    • 10/02/2005
    • 15:54:14
    • Score: 26 out of 28 people found this comment useful.
  • Slaves <*><*>

    Awesome paper. I couldn't stop reading it. Very informative and interesting. Nice work!I like your style of writing!
    • 03/02/2005
    • 17:00:59
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Porphyria's Lover

    U are very creative johnjjp. I like the way u always provide references to your readers. As in my case, i never read the poem but your work provided me with an awesome "sense" of awareness of what's actually happening.As diamondize1 stated, it is indeed quite bone chilling to an extent...Congrats on your creatitvity.
    • 01/02/2005
    • 15:21:10
    • Score: 23 out of 28 people found this comment useful.
  • REPETITION!

    I would call this (the top half) complete repetition...i did this in class and got this exact essay (u changed some words and added some new ones). This is illegal.Dont u know of plagiarism?
    • 31/01/2005
    • 17:42:32
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • G00d job

    This essay is a good source linked with the book "hamlet" I especially liked the way u give reference of the book to the readers.
    • 31/01/2005
    • 11:56:19
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Amazing

    I finally read this poem and am so amazed at the greed and jealousy this Duke had. i really liked the way u ended.It kinda leaves the reader longing to know if the Duke will change or if his new wife "will also be added to his art collection." I like the way u leave the reader thirsty for more. I've never read this poem...never even heard of it but now, i can even take a quiz on it (that's how much I learnt and appreciate it.) I give it two tumbs up and 100%...
    • 31/01/2005
    • 11:51:17
    • Score: 34 out of 39 people found this comment useful.
  • Great Essay

    I think that u put ur best in this essay and it really captures the reader's attention.Good job..work on the simple errors.
    • 31/01/2005
    • 11:23:58
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Gr8 Work

    Hey..i really liked your essay and think that it is very informative to the readers.It was exactly what i was looking for.Congrats!
    • 31/01/2005
    • 11:15:41
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Not Perfect but good

    On the other hand, u should've cleaned the 'rough edges' up because, take for instance, "the most absolute scariest site" (paragraph 3 line 5) bad english! aka double superlative...other than a few simple errors, u've scored big time!
    • 30/01/2005
    • 13:58:24
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Great essay!

    Yor are quite level-headed for \"your\" age and you show ideal acuity. Much respect given...congrats!!!
    • 30/01/2005
    • 13:52:25
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Hamlet

    Your essay made me more familar with the book...keep it up
    • 29/01/2005
    • 12:38:35
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Great!

    I think the writer of this essay..aka ME.. did a perfect job in creating this essay. Sure its not perfect, but its a great attempt and it produces a great viewpoint to anyone unaware of the book.*Congrats!!!
    • 29/01/2005
    • 12:12:38
    • Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Macbeth

    Great job in capturing the reader's attention. Your essay was completely honest and i wasn't bored at all.Great Job!
    • 29/01/2005
    • 11:21:41
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Great!

    This essay was just what I was looking for.It helped me in every way I wanted help in.My grade was the best when I turned "my" essay in at school!
    • 29/01/2005
    • 10:19:36
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.