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  • Asd

    A good essayyou ahve stated and explained your points- still think u have to work a bit on the intro and conc cuz i feel it mite be a tad casual/informalgood work
    • 18/02/2005
    • 11:31:11
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Rasicism

    Good informative essayrascism n discrimination still today, is an ugly spot on our nation clean image- the fater we get rid of it the betterkeep up the good workyou reseach yuor essay and you always have references to back up your pointsyou have demonstrated a mature vocabulary and your grasp of essay writing and style is impressiveKeep up the good work and keep on writing and submitting those essays
    • 18/02/2005
    • 01:34:48
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Asdsd

    A good essayinformative and right on targetyou dont mince words around which is a pleasant sightsome of ur paragraphs were a bit stop-startgood essay tho
    • 18/02/2005
    • 01:20:24
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • MIsuse

    A great essayconfidentiality is the right of every person living in a democratic countryyou have touched on this topic very wellGW
    • 18/02/2005
    • 01:13:03
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Web

    not a bad report though i didnt understand anythign until i read your comment at the bottom of the page but after that, when i reread it - the information was concise and really informativeGW
    • 18/02/2005
    • 01:12:46
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Misuse of power

    Good essay againyour content is always well researched n explainedtry cut bak on the I especially at the start of an essay because it gives it an informal feelingand an essay is basically a debate on apper in which your trying to prove your pointi felt you could have exteneded on some points such as in what type of training what type of constructed views etcanyways good work
    • 18/02/2005
    • 01:05:09
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Relocastion

    a really good essay againyou have connected the paragragraphs together well and that has created a flowing style in which u constanlty refer back to your main point , great workOne suggestion- a conclusion usually sums up all the points you have stated and explained in your main body and can aslo include an opinionGw tho -
    • 18/02/2005
    • 00:58:01
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Care

    A really good essaylove the fact that u actually put in references n a bibliographytry not to personalize the essay as much by not using the I word etcgiving ur opinion in conclusion is considered ok thogood work
    • 18/02/2005
    • 00:52:43
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Ship

    A good essay again,,once again i i think u could have put a bit more effort into the ending- made it more interestinga good story teller invovles the audience with the characters.i felt it took a bit too long to take off and then the ending was quite abrupt but i thought the middle-the main body of the story was magnificento!!keep up the good work
    • 18/02/2005
    • 00:46:21
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Routine

    it was a good essaygood use of the vocabularyA twist of at the end would have finsihed this piece off nicelyanyways well done
    • 18/02/2005
    • 00:34:24
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Caer

    A brilliant essayyou have stated your points and backed them up with referencesgood structureKEEp up the good work
    • 16/02/2005
    • 05:43:05
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Bond

    an interesting essayvery informative and you didnt mince any words around which is good too seealthough it was short and could have been expanded on it actually was a nice little essay/biography
    • 12/02/2005
    • 18:51:41
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Sagan

    Another brilliant essayyou have a persuasive and flowing writing style that is captivating
    • 12/02/2005
    • 18:49:16
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Culinary

    An excellent essaygood strucutre and use of paragraphsyou have managed to flow from one point to another which is quite a tough skill to masterWELL done
    • 12/02/2005
    • 18:47:19
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Romeo

    A good, quick summary to the playsome advice- dont personalise it: get rid off the Ian intro and a conclusion would have helped greatlyalso some small grammatical errors such as starting a sentence with so etcanyways keep up the good work
    • 07/02/2005
    • 21:27:18
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nitrous

    The information was goodYou over used several words such as- the next step and then etcPossible words could have been- after, continuing,consequently etcanyways apart from some small grammatical errors it was a good and informative read
    • 07/02/2005
    • 21:19:25
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Taning

    An interesting essay, you have explained your points wellGood structure and use of paragraphs.some small grammatical errors such as But, So at the start of the sentence but apart from that was good.One way in which you can improve is by practicing so your writing flows from one point to another-paragraph to paragraphanyways well done
    • 06/02/2005
    • 19:38:38
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Coronary

    Good essayWell structurei liked the way u wrote at the end ways in which to combat itKeep up the good work
    • 22/01/2005
    • 06:06:13
    • Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • LEE

    A really good informative essaythe strucutre was good but mebbe u should incorporated the titles into the paragraphsgood work tho
    • 22/01/2005
    • 06:01:29
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Ruskipaul

    hey this is a really good piece of writing :)good job!!!!
    • 19/11/2004
    • 15:52:52
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Gretzky

    a good informative essay.Your structure isnt very sound. Should incorparate the question into the essay and a intro and conclusion would be nice.Nice writing style
    • 18/08/2004
    • 19:50:38
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Tess

    I thouight overall this essay was written very well. Usually in an introduction you introduce the points briefly that you are going to explain in the paragraphs. Same with the conclusion. It is usually a very brief summary of the poitns you have included. You have a good writing structure with a good writing style. You should next to ur quotes should also write wherabout they are found. Apart formt hat, VERY GOOD WORK
    • 04/07/2004
    • 23:38:57
    • Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Fly Fishing

    I thought it was a very good essay but i felt that you could have cut out some information out. It dragged on a bit too long but apart form that the essay was good
    • 30/06/2004
    • 01:50:53
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • BOXING

    I thought that was a very good essay, precise and straight to the words, ud dint mince aroudn witht he words. Your information was good set out in a captivating writing style and your structure was good. Keep up the good work
    • 22/06/2004
    • 01:20:51
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Sorry

    there r supposed to be italics there but cheathouse doesnt have italics so it turned into regulaR AND MADE IT HARDER TO READ
    • 18/06/2004
    • 09:15:31
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • TAo Cheng

    I though it was a very good essay but try to avoid the use of I during the essay. I thought ur conclusion didnt really sum up the whole essay but everything else was really good
    • 18/06/2004
    • 02:11:42
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Stem Cells

    I thought it was an informative, precise and accurate essay. UR essay would have been a lot better if u had incorparated the question into it but apart from that it is a fine essay
    • 18/06/2004
    • 02:04:26
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Hypocritical

    What is the purpose of this essay??U have just givin the negatives what about the positives??I felt this essay was just about ur opinion and u didnt state the other side. but ur info was good.:P
    • 17/06/2004
    • 09:37:58
    • Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Fdsa

    A very good contrast and comparison. You have a good grip on what to do. Keep up the good work
    • 17/06/2004
    • 06:32:04
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Character past

    You have provided an indepth view of the characters pasts, similarities etc.Keep up the good work
    • 17/06/2004
    • 06:31:57
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Scale

    Ive never tired writing an essay about a composition but it sound hard. You have done a good job.Keep up te good work
    • 17/06/2004
    • 06:31:15
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Antibiotics

    Sadly the abuse of antibiotics is becomin more freequently these day. You have written a nice essay on it. Keep up the good work
    • 17/06/2004
    • 06:30:35
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • GREEN LEAF:P

    An interesting journal in a form of a story. You have a captivating writing style-keep up the good work
    • 16/06/2004
    • 09:47:21
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Jorunalist

    I felt that the story was good but it was also a bit bland. IT wasnt every exciting to read and didnt have a lot of action. Short Story's usually grab u and draw u into the story line in the oepening few paragraphs but i felt ur'se didnt. At least u trued:-)
    • 15/06/2004
    • 03:44:05
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Asdf

    I felt that it was a good essay but in some places i got confused because they hadd to many information in them but paart from that it was a good informative essay
    • 15/06/2004
    • 03:37:01
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Kurmenell Beach

    I felt the information was really good and u asnwered each question precisely and accurately. IF you incorparated the questions into an essay form it owuld have been much better.GOOD work
    • 15/06/2004
    • 03:34:05
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Speech

    I thought that was a well planned speech. You have stated and explained it. You have included the techniques and themes with good reference to the two poems. AGin, a very good essay. you deserved the A
    • 15/06/2004
    • 01:17:08
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Rob Dawson

    You have a good handle of poetry and u can describe the techniques and themes precisely and accuratelyVery good work
    • 15/06/2004
    • 01:11:42
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Baboon

    Very nice story. Short and SweetI loved the remark by u at the end when u approached the town. Good Work
    • 15/06/2004
    • 01:10:31
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Blake

    Agian i thoguht the information was very good. I felt that you should have icnorparated the questions into ur essay but apart from that it was really interesting to read
    • 15/06/2004
    • 01:09:02
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Ruskipaul

    yes there are 10 parts to the story to which i have written 5 and submitted them. THE next 5 will be coming along soon-I hope
    • 15/06/2004
    • 01:03:00
    • Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Anthem

    I felt u hit right on the bullseye when u mentioned owen being critical of them getting proper burials.VEry good work
    • 15/06/2004
    • 01:00:12
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Furtility

    i felt that u explained this poem very well and you covered most of the points. i like the way u gave examples in ur essay back to the poem.GOOD WORK
    • 15/06/2004
    • 00:58:07
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • DE decorum

    I felt u explained the poem very well. You have a nice flowing style and i felt that u linked the paragraphs fairly well. Good JOB
    • 15/06/2004
    • 00:56:02
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Nature

    I thought it contained good information but it would have been a whole lot better in essay form than note form.GW
    • 14/06/2004
    • 09:31:20
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Ender's game

    a good very informative report. U didnt mince around with words which is goodsomepoints could have been expanded on but apart from that it was Good
    • 14/06/2004
    • 09:28:38
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • NEo

    I loved the movieand i felt that you explained the first scene very wella sentence for intro and conclusion wouldnt have hurt
    • 14/06/2004
    • 09:26:25
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Racial

    I thought it was a very informative essay. I liked the way u backed up your points with evidence-links to websitesLike johjjip said, a conclusion would have made it better but apart from that it was a good essay
    • 14/06/2004
    • 09:15:45
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Cyber

    I thought the information was good and it was very informative. Written in an essay form would have made ur paper so much better
    • 14/06/2004
    • 09:13:10
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Global

    GOOD ESSAYWit had a nice structure and was written in a good informative styleITs good to find an essay that present facts without playing around with words!!KEEp up the good work
    • 14/06/2004
    • 05:25:41
    • Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Hunter

    Its a good poem with good use of words, but i felt that this poem didnt really flow very well, it kinda sounded like stop-startingbut anyways good work
    • 14/06/2004
    • 05:22:15
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Deprression

    HOw u got 95% for this and in 13 grade is astounding. You must have payed the teacher a lot of money:P j/kThe info was good but u had to expand on the points.
    • 10/06/2004
    • 01:31:04
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Animal farm

    when i was 13 i read it i thought it was the greatest book i ever read. This essay is a fitting tribute to a good novel. You have a nice writing style, good structure and you cover every aspect.Well DOne and FEEl Proud on a great essay
    • 10/06/2004
    • 01:24:53
    • Score: 9 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Cruel Intentions

    EVen though i hated the movie, it is a well written film analyze.i felt that in some parts u could have cut out some unecassary info.Btw Good work
    • 10/06/2004
    • 01:12:17
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Short Sotry

    A very good short storyU have a captivating writing stylei felt that one are which let u done was the bit when he threw the brick and all of them died. Since ur whole story was very vivid and descriptive i felt that could have used more descriptionAnyway good work
    • 10/06/2004
    • 01:05:54
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Speilburg

    Very good biography.Nice sructure and a informative writing styleKeep up the good work
    • 10/06/2004
    • 00:58:50
    • Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Ode of love

    A really good poem. Your use of words is very goodi felt that in some places ur poem could have flowed a bit better but good work anywayz
    • 10/06/2004
    • 00:50:37
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Lover

    VEry good essaynicely structured with a good flowing yet captivating writing style.I noticed that , in ur other essays too, u used the phrase 'Of course'. I felt that didnt quite fit really well in ur writing styelanwyay gw AGAIN
    • 09/06/2004
    • 07:09:07
    • Score: 33 out of 36 people found this comment useful.
  • Dylan thomas

    Again, a well thought out and written essay. I liked the way you state and then explain ideas.I felt u analyzed the peom very precisely and didnt mince with wordsvery good
    • 09/06/2004
    • 07:06:37
    • Score: 40 out of 46 people found this comment useful.
  • Last Duchess

    I felt this was a well wirtten essay.I like your writing style because ideas and points flow from one point to another.VEry good, well researched essay
    • 09/06/2004
    • 07:04:28
    • Score: 58 out of 64 people found this comment useful.
  • PAin

    A good poem with a nice start and middleI felt that your conclusion was quite bland and simpleanyway good work
    • 07/06/2004
    • 21:45:28
    • Score: 10 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Hmmm

    A good poem but it sounds like ure a bit obsessed with the darksidegothic^_^nah good work
    • 07/06/2004
    • 09:11:44
    • Score: 3 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Middle-class

    Good essaydont use the I point of view.state what ur essay is about but dont say \'I\'anyway good job
    • 04/06/2004
    • 01:45:47
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • GAY

    It was made for a man and woman to live together in the sacred ceremony of marriage and gay and lesbians marriages defile that.
    • 01/06/2004
    • 04:11:21
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • WOWOWOW

    Amen to thatyou have created a literatature masterpieceGW Love your writing style
    • 01/06/2004
    • 04:06:17
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • REvelation

    Again, a very good, well-written essayONe point you could have included was that the revelation the book was written as a guideline for the future- the so called end daysanyway GW
    • 31/05/2004
    • 18:12:49
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • ROMANS

    A good essayi felt you could have included that the Holy Spirit had been promised as a gift and when given as gift had to be cherished or it would be lostanwyay gw
    • 31/05/2004
    • 18:09:51
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • WTO

    A good essay but get RID of the TOPICs. Let your essay flow from one point to another.GW
    • 29/05/2004
    • 23:46:59
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Blacks

    i felt it was a good essay apart when u used the term 'BLACKS'. I felt it was kind of rascist. A more appropriate term might have been Negro or African-American etc.
    • 29/05/2004
    • 23:44:33
    • Score: 5 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • POem

    WAT A GREAT POEM
    • 29/05/2004
    • 03:58:25
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Great

    I love your writing styleA good insight of a drug addictGW
    • 28/05/2004
    • 01:02:49
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Indoor

    Good esssayYou have more chance of getting injured in indoor soccer compared to oudoor soccer!next time try to back up your points with quotes, evidence etc.anyway gw
    • 26/05/2004
    • 02:24:48
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Russia

    A good essayyou definitely hit on some good pointsjust watch out for grammar and spelling errorsNEVA START A SENTENCE WITH BUTanyway gw
    • 26/05/2004
    • 02:19:09
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Iraq

    a good essayYou have a good writing style and structure.I felt that you should link your paragraphs better. It feels like a big gap when a good essay writer will ocntinuall flow on from another idea/issue to another.
    • 21/05/2004
    • 01:53:15
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Euthenaisia

    Good informative essay on a contraversial topicI feel that suicide even assited suicide(euthenesia) is cutting ur life so i feel its wronganyway good work.
    • 21/05/2004
    • 01:49:29
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • EVolution of Canada

    I thought it was an informative essay.You forgot to CONCLUDE your essaykeep up the good work though!!
    • 21/05/2004
    • 01:43:25
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Multicultarism

    i thought it was a good essay written in a nice styleGood informationWhen writing essay never write I in beginning. Its allowed in conclusion but never in the start. Also never start a sentence with BECAUSEApart from a a few grammatical errors it was a good essay
    • 21/05/2004
    • 01:40:53
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Serfs

    An interesting sideI usually thought the serfs were ignorant etcGood work
    • 21/05/2004
    • 01:36:48
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Germany

    GOod essaylove you writing syleNEVER START A SENTENCE WITH BUT!!!!!!!11
    • 19/05/2004
    • 04:48:48
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • MAthew

    For a 8th grader work, its pretty goodi felt that you could have linked your paragraphsbetteralso never use the word'I' in essays. Even if you dont find information on it keep the readers guessing!!anyway keepup the good work
    • 19/05/2004
    • 04:46:29
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Unification

    A good essaygood style and formati felt that some of the stuff you mentioned could have been left out. It looked a bit cramp.ALso try to link your paragraphs better. A good essay writer has a writing style that will link paragraphs and ideas etc.Keepup the good work.
    • 19/05/2004
    • 04:39:52
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Sikh

    When you write an essay there should be a format. Intro, paragraphs and conclusion no matter how big the essay is.In essay never write 'I' unless in conclusion when its asked for opinion etc.anyway the information was good
    • 19/05/2004
    • 04:35:25
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Marihuana

    I thought it was a good essayvery informativeYour conclusion should sum up everything you repeated before.your paragraphs should have a sentence that introduces them and concludes them.i felt that your paragrpah use was a bit choppy. I felt that you didnt to attempt to link them in anyway.Apart from that, a good essayPS, these are only tips for further improvement
    • 18/05/2004
    • 02:56:41
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Legal

    I thought it was a good essay set out in a good formatone point i felt that you could improve was your structure. I felt the break between the paragraphs was a bit too big-choppy. A good essay writer will flow from one point to another kind of linking them together.Anyway good work
    • 18/05/2004
    • 02:48:54
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Spartan

    i thought it was a good essaygood style and formatYour conclusion should quickly summarise everything u repeated before.you could have expanded on points such as: wat did they eat? the good poitns and the repercussionsanyway good work
    • 18/05/2004
    • 02:45:54
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • INspec

    k i thought it was a good story but you have to capture your audience in the first few paragraphs and i felt that ur start to the story, quite bluntly was boring.anyway keep up the good work
    • 15/05/2004
    • 09:43:58
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Biost

    I thought it was good apart form that itkinda seemed written from a man's point of view. Try next time to argue for both man and feamle or be indifferent.Gw anyway
    • 13/05/2004
    • 09:05:43
    • Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • GOOD

    AMEN TO THAT:pGOOD ESSAY with good style and structure
    • 13/05/2004
    • 09:01:48
    • Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • JESES

    A good essay but i think that u could expanded on this pointthat Jesus was wasnt fearless, or super human, he was just liek us and went thought everyhign we did, only diff was he had a purposeGW
    • 13/05/2004
    • 08:59:23
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • GW

    hey good worki like your writing stylenice style and formatkeep up the gw
    • 09/05/2004
    • 23:56:36
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Duh!

    Carbon testing has been proven in some cases to be inaccurate. Scientists carbon-tested a pice of clay-they came up with like 2 million years old when it's age was only about 400-600 years oldplus wats holds all the atoms when atoms naturally repel each other???science never answers the most wanted questionsanwyay an interesting essay
    • 09/05/2004
    • 23:50:48
    • Score: 13 out of 15 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting-.-

    i felt that you could have expanded on danforth's refusal to see the truth and the cunning manipulation by Abigail and the mass hysteria surrounding the Salem trialsotheriwse an excellent essay set out in a good style and good format
    • 09/05/2004
    • 23:41:59
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Informative

    interesting stuffi felt that you could have expanded on points such as why those events happened(the view of the terorists), the different responses of the nation to the different disasterskeep trying
    • 09/05/2004
    • 23:37:34
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting--

    a good informative essaygood style and format apart from the conclusion.A bit bland but good-information wise Keep Trying
    • 09/05/2004
    • 23:24:57
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • WOWOWOw

    wow, that was a great readi love ur writing styleMademe really think aboutotherpeople's point of viewso thnxKeep up the good Work
    • 09/05/2004
    • 23:21:01
    • Score: 18 out of 22 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    Good essayi like your writing style but you had no set structurean intor and conc.. would have made this a better essayanyway GW
    • 09/05/2004
    • 23:02:02
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • ...

    its a good essay but some of the information lookslike it has been copied out straight from the textbook/sitei could be wrong:(anyway it was informative and set out in a good style and format
    • 09/05/2004
    • 22:47:22
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • GOOD

    Good essayVery informative-considering i knew nothing about the Atari game manualSet out in good, readable formatKeep up the good work!
    • 09/05/2004
    • 22:39:54
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • GOOD ESSAY

    You didnt waste any words!!Good work388 words of in ofmation set out in an interesting style and format.Well Done
    • 09/05/2004
    • 22:33:34
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Hmmm

    This essay has a lot of grammar mistakes.Do not start a sentence with BECAUSEanyway the level of writing is not fit for a 10grade and you would be lucky if you got anything over 60%Keep trying though!!!We learn from our mistakes!!
    • 09/05/2004
    • 22:30:21
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting

    nice essay but you could have expanded on some of your points. your conclusion should summarise quickly everything you you mentioned before.Apart from that a Nice essaykeep up the GW!!(good work)
    • 09/05/2004
    • 22:12:02
    • Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • HMMM

    hey a good essayu seemed to take a more with the hackers than against hackers attitude. You should try when writing ur essays to be more indifferent and your opinion could be based in the conclusion.good style and fomat.keep up the good work!!
    • 09/05/2004
    • 08:45:00
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Dating

    a nice essayvery short thoughalso what happneed in your case doesnt happen to everyoneyuo hit spot on about the point where getting that self confidence up to ask someone.good wokrk
    • 12/05/2003
    • 04:11:16
    • Score: 7 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Stalin

    a great informative essaygood structureyou backed up your points well
    • 12/05/2003
    • 04:01:22
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Illusion

    Really nice essayyou summarized the characters very well.after reading this i want to go and find this bookWell done
    • 09/05/2003
    • 18:36:30
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Hmmm--

    i thought this essay contained SOME good informationur structure is not very goodalso i noticed grammar errorsi feel that this report is just your view of the issue.You dont have any examples to back up your pointsKeep trying!
    • 09/05/2003
    • 08:58:33
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Shawshank

    very good essaynicely structuredyour points were made clear though they could have been expanded moreWELL DONE
    • 09/05/2003
    • 08:54:10
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • IRAQ

    good informative essaygood stucturei think thta a lot of the points u made are actually theoriesfor example saddam had Saddam has provided headquarters, operating bases, training camps, and other support to terrorist groups fighting the governments of other countries. Isnt it that saddam is supscpected to do this as there is no enident proof. also no evdient proof of him having wepaons of mass destuction althought it is STRONGly supsected.anwyay a very good essay
    • 07/05/2003
    • 10:08:36
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Hate

    very short essayYou introduced some points but u didnt explain them. Could have expandedfor example; the last paragargaph- many celebrities to create songs, give examples etc.i also noticed small grammar errorsanyway short but informative essay
    • 07/05/2003
    • 07:54:52
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Schhool Pride

    you had some good pointsOften students who want to join a sports school team but dont are often afraid about failure not the lack of school pride(I THINK)Also peer group pressure plays a large part.Anyway i thought this was an excellent paper with a good structure
    • 05/05/2003
    • 05:09:47
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Russian

    I thoguht this was a well written essay, though it was short.No conclusion but i do see an introduction.Some of your points could have been expanded but well done.
    • 05/05/2003
    • 05:06:04
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Attraction...

    A Good informative essayi think that personalities pay a big part in attractionGreat essay
    • 04/05/2003
    • 20:24:28
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • CANNABIS

    I thought the essay was well written.Ithad a good structure and you made your points well.Very persuasiveWell done
    • 29/04/2003
    • 09:48:33
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • FAn story

    very enjoyable storyCreativeExcellentThis story could ahve been made to go on a bit longer bust still a very entertaining story
    • 27/04/2003
    • 11:08:29
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Essay on Cell Phones

    Very persuasive essay. You made your point well.Good structure.Although short and could be expanded on, this is still a very good essay.
    • 22/04/2003
    • 08:32:41
    • Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Memoir on father

    I thought this was a very good essay.You explained your father very well.Once you think about it you reliaze how lucky we have fathers.Evident structure and overall an Excellent report.
    • 22/04/2003
    • 08:28:58
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Ok....

    I thought this essay was well written but it certainly could have been expanded on.One trick that should have been used was to quote examples from the book.Anyway good work.
    • 22/04/2003
    • 08:19:54
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Essay...

    I thought this was a good essay.Good description of the book without writing too much.I think im now going to go and find this book because the way you explained it makes it sound realy good.Keep up the good Work
    • 22/04/2003
    • 08:16:33
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Hmmm

    It has some good information but it should be expanded moreLike in the Transformation paragraph you say she became transformed. How did she become transformed? etcAnyway a nice essay
    • 18/04/2003
    • 08:11:38
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    I thought this was an excellent and funnu report.Well doneevident use of structure which is alwyas good to see.Very creativeKeep up the good work
    • 18/04/2003
    • 08:08:38
    • Score: 14 out of 14 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    i thought this essay was very informative and very good. good use of information and overall a great essay.Coarse language is one of our societys greatest and ugliest habit.WELL DONE!!!
    • 18/04/2003
    • 08:02:13
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Great

    I thought this was an excellent essayGood structure and very informative.Excellent
    • 18/04/2003
    • 00:21:38
    • Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Hmmm

    in some parts u have a lot of description while on others u have none.Some of the things u mentioned were'nt unrealistic.I detected some gramamr errorsOne example is- my wife shouted " oh my god".Wouldnt that have an excalamtion mark?anyway i felt that this story was enjoyable and fun to read
    • 18/04/2003
    • 00:18:10
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    I thought this was an excellent paper.you made your points clear. Evident structure.Good use of words apart from that one sentence "With just one click."I thought this overallw as a very good essay
    • 12/04/2003
    • 23:36:13
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Great

    I thought this summary of the movie was excellent. Good use of words.Structure is evident.Overall a good essay
    • 12/04/2003
    • 23:22:40
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Wave

    i must say, you described and summarized the movie very well.It made me wanna go out and hire it myself :)Anyway good piece of writing especially your use ofwords.Kepp it up
    • 12/04/2003
    • 23:09:38
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Ways to improve

    You had some good points in your essay.First of all try to do spelling and grammar check. I detected many mistakes.Also you should have an introduction and a conclusion.Every time you start on a different point, you should put in paragraphs.The essay was a little short and could have been expanded more.Anyway try to keep these points in your mind next time you write an essay
    • 12/04/2003
    • 11:06:01
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Phone use

    I agree that the use of cell phones could be good in case of emergency. Although when youre driving youre putting some attention into what the other person is saying or what youre saying and that is distracting you. Even if by a little margin. This could slow down your reaction time and your awareness.Good point though on peopel eating in cars. That is definitely a big distraction.
    • 11/04/2003
    • 09:35:12
    • Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    A nice essay but you have to watch your punctuation, especially capitals in the first bit of the essay.Anyway a good essay
    • 11/04/2003
    • 09:29:29
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • HMMM

    I thought this essay was well written.What you said about Christians saying that Eve was the cause of original sin is not correct. the only reason of unrest, diputes amongst Christians are the misinterpretations.The Bible was made with values like peace, love, kindness etc. If everyone followed these values there woudlnt be any problems. Besides the Bible focuses a lot on LOVE. If you love your neighbour like yourself you shouldnt have nay problems.
    • 11/04/2003
    • 09:26:16
    • Score: 10 out of 15 people found this comment useful.
  • Poem

    I thought this was a great poem.It made me reminisce about tiems when i was a little kid.Anyway good job!!
    • 10/04/2003
    • 22:35:31
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Essay

    i thought this essay was pretty goodYou made your point well.Although i feel that the british never did have a well structured class system in the 18th centure.Thats because the gap between the poor the medium and the rich was to great.The Poor people basically had no oppurtunites and lived in slums. for a poor person to work his way out of his poor conditions was almost unheard of.
    • 10/04/2003
    • 11:28:50
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Of Mice and Men

    i thought this essay was very well expressed and you certainly made your point on some of the power issues .I feel that this story also had a lot to do with cruelty, especially when people picked on lennie
    • 08/04/2003
    • 03:03:10
    • Score: 17 out of 17 people found this comment useful.