Very well written and very interesting. Works citied would be nice
- 26/06/2008
- 18:41:26
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This is simply some plagiarized work without any proper citations (if it's NOT your idea you MUST cite IT!). Far too short no proper structure.
- 15/06/2008
- 15:05:47
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Too short, useless junk info, no proper links.
- 15/06/2008
- 15:03:16
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Very well written. Great material :D
- 09/06/2008
- 14:10:32
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This is perhaps the worst essay I've ever read. Not only is this work obliviously biased and focused on encouraging racism, it is poorly written with bland vocabulary and descriptions. This is an absolutely horrible piece of trash.
- 04/05/2008
- 17:46:06
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Very through review, intelligently written and edited
- 19/04/2008
- 18:10:52
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Good summary but it is too short
- 17/04/2008
- 19:28:35
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Amazing insights into the play. This is an excellent analysis of the scene.
- 10/04/2008
- 15:57:03
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Great essay. You have some real insight into the play but you should work on the conclusion.
- 10/04/2008
- 15:49:45
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
extremely useful and insightful notes, thanks :D
- 03/04/2008
- 18:47:04
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Very well written, great grammar, excellent insight into the play. The ending could be improved but excellent piece.
- 03/04/2008
- 18:31:37
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Great grammar, structure, and use of imagery
- 16/03/2008
- 14:31:53
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Reformatting required. Nice works citied though lol
- 16/03/2008
- 14:30:47
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Great, interesting paper but it lacks citation.
- 16/03/2008
- 14:29:22
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
A brilliantly well written essay with amazing vivid imagery.
- 16/03/2008
- 14:27:17
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
A well written and touching paper.
- 16/03/2008
- 14:23:22
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Grammar: GreatStructure: a bit short but conciseInsight: ExcellentClarity: Clear
- 06/03/2008
- 13:54:38
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Very well written but the ending is simply beautiful.
- 05/03/2008
- 15:12:06
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Very useful article, great grammar, well structured. The conclusion seems a little rushed.
- 05/03/2008
- 14:46:05
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Very Useful :D
- 28/02/2008
- 22:07:46
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Very interesting and well written but the format needs work.
- 28/02/2008
- 21:41:12
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
The essay is somewhat short but it is very well written. good job!
- 28/02/2008
- 21:24:08
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Grammar: Great, Structure: Good, Diction: Good but can be improved further, Insight: Great but conclusion feels too biased
- 28/02/2008
- 18:42:02
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Great essay but you may want to elaborate on some of your ideas and exemplify them.
- 28/02/2008
- 18:38:26
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Interesting but too short. Exemplify and elaborate.
- 28/02/2008
- 18:36:22
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Grammar: Good, Structure: ok, Insight: Good. Too short, not too many original ideas. Overall though it's good.
- 28/02/2008
- 18:34:48
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Grammar: GreatStructure: a bit short but goodInsight: ExcellentClarity: Clear
- 28/02/2008
- 18:33:09
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Good grammar, ideas, and structure but should work on diction.
- 28/02/2008
- 18:31:09
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is more like an extremely short summary...with lots of unnecessary facts.e.g. " There are more levels than the first game and this one is x box live enabled. Which is awesome. The multi player is very good but very rarely do i play it cause my sisters pist at me cuz I always shoot her in the head with a sniper :P . "
- 25/02/2008
- 14:41:08
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
plagiarized from http://www.123helpme.com/view.asp?id=13750
- 25/02/2008
- 14:29:51
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Well written and cited but slightly short.
- 25/02/2008
- 14:22:12
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Great essay but the introduction seems cliche.
- 25/02/2008
- 14:20:53
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Excellent essay. This is a really unique topic. Very creative.
- 25/02/2008
- 13:38:37
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Grammar: GreatStructure: GoodInsight: ExcellentClarity: ClearCreativity: :)
- 25/02/2008
- 13:36:58
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Nice work, it was short but included all the steps and was amusing.
- 25/02/2008
- 13:35:35
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Well written essay but the conclusion appears abrupt.
- 25/02/2008
- 13:33:01
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Good start but you need to further explain your ideas.
- 24/02/2008
- 18:44:50
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Very well written. Excellent work. Maybe some more sources?
- 24/02/2008
- 18:44:08
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This is a very well written essay. Great work.Possible Improvements: maybe a bit of vocab but nothing besides that
- 24/02/2008
- 18:43:11
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Excellent essay: Early perfect structure, concise, informative.
- 06/11/2007
- 13:47:28
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Your essay is good so far but you need to elaborate on your ideas and expand the essay.
- 06/11/2007
- 13:46:19
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This is a good essay overall but you need more anaylsis. In addition, you need to include a works citied since I don't know which publication of "The Prince" you used. Grammar and clarity was excellent. Overall the essay was good.
- 14/01/2007
- 10:25:57
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Great Essay! Very informative. Well cited. My opinion: Video games can be both beneficial as well as harmful. The effect of the video game completely depends on the individual. It is when the individual is unable to distinguish the difference between reality and vitural reality that problems begin to arise.
- 07/01/2007
- 12:00:00
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This is a good essay but it could be improved upon. For example, you could have included secondary sources.
- 17/12/2006
- 09:35:52
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This essay is well researched and overall deserves a good mark. You need to work on your intro.
- 17/12/2006
- 09:22:49
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is more like a dictionary answer (or something from a concise encyclopedia) than an essay. No citation. No quotes. Well...at least you did research...
- 17/12/2006
- 09:18:33
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Excellent essay. It's very well written and for the most part does not contain biased arguments.
- 17/12/2006
- 09:13:14
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Finally! This is the first essay I've seen in a month that actually included a works cited! Great structure, grammar, and information! Excellent Essay!
- 14/12/2006
- 13:47:37
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Overall the essay is good and provides good insight. Diction needs some improvement.
- 10/12/2006
- 07:57:35
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Mostly well written but your essay lacks citation.
- 10/12/2006
- 07:54:00
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Great essay, very well written. The only suggestion I can make is improving your diction.
- 10/12/2006
- 07:52:05
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
One of the best Othello essays I have ever read. Extremely well written, well explained, well structured.
- 12/11/2006
- 16:21:13
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Very creative story....wow...
- 11/10/2006
- 18:27:47
- Score: 6 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
You put a lot of effort and research into this essay. Great! but I noticed that most of your essays are just repetition of facts that anyone can find. It is best to further elaborate on ideas.
- 11/10/2006
- 18:17:11
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I always enjoyed watching Star Wars...I would never get tired of the movies. Unfortunely I can't say the same about your essay. It defintely needs more thought, connections, and examples.
- 28/09/2006
- 16:52:52
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Fix your formatting already! In addition I really wouldn't consider this an essay....more like a dictionary answer.
- 18/09/2006
- 13:36:14
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Your essay really only skimmed the surface of a very deep situation. There isn't enough anylasis and thought. Anyways all other aspects were well done, your ideas flowed and proof was given.
- 18/09/2006
- 13:33:59
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Well written, great ideas (for the most part) and clear writing. Last line was a bit out of character though. "The hobos know that what they are doing is the right thing, and they are waiting for the rest of society to realise this too. Books are the past and the future and in the end, it is ignorance which is condemned. Fahrenheit 451 - The temperature at which book paper catches fire and burns."
- 18/09/2006
- 13:30:59
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This is obviously a rushed essay and defintely needs more work.
- 12/09/2006
- 16:53:25
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This sounds exactly like something out of an economics text book...Need to do some background checks on this essay.
- 12/09/2006
- 16:51:43
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
There is obviously more work needed in this piece of work but it's a good start.
- 12/09/2006
- 16:38:23
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
il y a beaucoup de detal dans cet article mais c'est un peu court.
- 15/06/2006
- 16:12:26
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This essay is very well structured but you need to work on applying techniques forthe introduction and conclusion.
- 16/11/2005
- 21:43:45
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This essay defintely needs some work, you have only explorered one aspect of the importance of names and not the other. You forget to mention it's importance as an reminder of the past, an identity, and it's meaning.
- 13/11/2005
- 19:43:20
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Your essay did not explorer deeply into the subject you just skimmed it, you need to think through it carfully. Overall the essay was well written but next time try not to conclude with such an obvious statement.
- 05/11/2005
- 18:35:32
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This is a good essay but the grammatical structure is terrible. The information you included is good.
- 31/10/2005
- 15:57:39
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Very well developed essay. Requires some revision and words need to be more concise.
- 28/10/2005
- 15:57:26
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
In general it was done very well but the introduction was very weak; beginning with a definition has been done too many times before.
- 20/10/2005
- 22:05:46
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Job well done. The only thing I can think of is to possibly show some other prespectives of Richard.
- 20/10/2005
- 22:04:05
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What can I say? You did the research and finished your essay; there was nothing new yet the information was good. A good idea would be to look at other infections and see how they relate.
- 20/10/2005
- 21:54:26
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Good essay in general but it could be much better considering you are in Gr.10. Your wording is very weak and inconcise; and obiviously you are trying to cover too much in such a short essay giving very general ideas.
- 20/10/2005
- 21:50:41
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This essay is good as long as you are not submitting it to a Grade 10 History teacher as your final essay. I found your wording in the essay was very weak and unconcise, you should consider revising because you often repeated ideas over and over again.
- 18/10/2005
- 19:54:25
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Although to many people the 1920s roared, technically it did not roar but good essay though (in terms of structure).
- 18/10/2005
- 15:39:59
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Your message is very unclear and has many areas for misreading, try revising it.
- 17/10/2005
- 17:15:45
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Well structered, written, cited...but for some reason you would expect more from a college student at your level, more indept possibly.
- 16/10/2005
- 18:24:03
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Great introduction and recognization (accurate information) of the topic.
- 16/10/2005
- 15:53:46
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Great structure, style, and information. It's almost perfect.
- 16/10/2005
- 15:49:45
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Well written but you might want to reconsider the way you structured this essay.
- 16/10/2005
- 15:42:22
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
A job well done. Obviously you had looked into the subject of human psychology to find the true answer to this question.
- 16/10/2005
- 15:39:30
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.