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  • great essay

    great essay very detailed and over many instruments. great job
    • 23/04/2010
    • 20:10:17
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  • great essay

    great essay very detailed and over many instruments. great job
    • 23/04/2010
    • 20:10:14
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  • great essay

    great essay very detailed and over many instruments. great job
    • 23/04/2010
    • 20:10:03
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  • Gender Bias in the classroom

    Good analysis on gender biases. This was a very interesting essay to read. Excellent points and word flow. Job well done.
    • 26/08/2009
    • 23:41:56
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  • His paper discuss how important having an education is. It discusses how formal education guarantees power among society.

    Very powerful and persuasive essay. Contains all the points and explanations. Good citation. Well done.
    • 26/08/2009
    • 23:34:48
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  • Truancy in Our School's: A Growing Problem

    Really well written points. Deserves a smiley and A+. Your essay shows deep analysis of the problem and well written info. Well done.
    • 26/08/2009
    • 00:16:11
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  • Staffing Plan

    Fantastic essay. Shows in depth analysis of the public school system. The pros and the cons and the fix. Well done.
    • 26/08/2009
    • 00:13:56
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  • Our Education Gap: Where We Are Losing Our Children

    Very good essay! smiley is well deserved. You have made some interesting points that compliment each other nicely, Well done.
    • 26/08/2009
    • 00:09:07
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  • Racism a problem? Surely not!

    Excellent points and good topic. This essay was a interesting read. Well done.
    • 18/08/2009
    • 23:17:43
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  • Effects of Polio on Society

    Well written with interesting points. Good topic to write about. Well done.
    • 18/08/2009
    • 23:09:58
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  • Young Marriage Now a Days

    Agreed with MccaddenSucks a short paragraph explaining things in detail would prove more helpful. Good work.
    • 18/08/2009
    • 23:06:52
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  • Capitalism and Socialism Briefly Explained

    Good straight forward explanation of Capitalism and Socialism. Good short essay.
    • 18/08/2009
    • 23:03:45
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  • Food, culture and hospitality

    Agreed. Food is essential for our survival. We are not focusing on our survival but instead how our food tastes. well done.
    • 16/08/2009
    • 21:46:50
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  • Radiocarbon Dating: Merits and Drawbacks.

    Great essay! all your points really supported each other and made this interesting essay. Great work.
    • 12/08/2009
    • 21:40:32
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  • Schizophrenia

    Schizophrenia is a pain. This essay is excellent, has citations and great points. You even suggested a way to help others with this illness. well done.
    • 12/08/2009
    • 21:03:21
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  • Bipolar disorder

    very interesting essay topic. Has very defined points and provides the reader with consistency. Well done.
    • 12/08/2009
    • 20:59:44
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  • ADD/ADHD

    Good essay choice. Lacks sources and some spelling mistakes. Other wise, every thing is well done.
    • 12/08/2009
    • 20:55:26
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  • Gender Gap in College attendance

    This essay is hilarious, but also true. Now gender roles have started to change, so more men have started to become stay at home dads. Well done. great essay.
    • 11/08/2009
    • 22:56:51
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  • Single People Should Be Allowed to Adopt

    i agree with devious_youth, your points are very persuasive but they do not support each other. Great essay, well done.
    • 11/08/2009
    • 22:52:01
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  • Divorce: The Quick Fix?

    This is a very interesting topic. It is heavily debated, but people's expectations are too high then divorce happens. overall good essay. well done
    • 11/08/2009
    • 22:48:57
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  • Graffiti

    Very detailed well rounded essay. it entirely captured my view of Graffiti.
    • 31/07/2009
    • 21:54:04
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Power and its effect upon our society

    Excellent essay, has everything excepts sources. The grammar and points are very well done. Shows you spent a lot of time on this, good job.
    • 30/07/2009
    • 22:40:55
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  • Breaching Experiment: The Human Response to the Invasion of Personal Space

    This essay is excellent. Clearly shows how one would react negatively or positively to another persons presence. Good grammar too. Well done.
    • 28/07/2009
    • 22:08:10
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  • How Widespread is Sexual Deviance?

    Good info and interesting essay topic. Good amount of reference's too. Well done.
    • 28/07/2009
    • 22:02:58
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  • Loyalty, Humor and Kindness.

    Not necessarily an essay, but it contains good points that we should use in our lives. Even though its not an essay, i still give you a smiley for an insightful message.
    • 27/07/2009
    • 22:36:58
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  • Poor: dealing with the cycles and culture of poverty.

    Really well defined essay. It was a interesting read. Well done.
    • 27/07/2009
    • 22:34:17
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  • Female Deviance

    Interesting topic and good info. Your own words would have made the essay a bit better.
    • 27/07/2009
    • 22:30:57
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  • Abusive Relationship.

    First step is realizing how crappy your relationship is when you get abused and the 2nd step is to tell some one and receive help. Well done on this essay.
    • 27/07/2009
    • 22:28:55
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  • Boys in education

    Times are changing, and yes girls seem to have more success now then a long time ago. Very good essay topic and good information. It was a delightful read, well done.
    • 26/07/2009
    • 22:47:26
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  • The Whole Truth And Nothing But The Truth; How Essays Actually Impact Students

    Very compassionate and well thought out essay, it deserves a smiley face. An essay about essays. i really enjoyed this topic. good work.
    • 26/07/2009
    • 22:44:42
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  • The decline of higher education

    School would be a lot more convenient if it was free, but people wouldn't take it as serious if we had to pay a lot of money for it. Very informative essay well done.
    • 26/07/2009
    • 22:42:00
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  • How parents involvement in school affects their children's grades.

    Dry is indeed the word, but this was very informative and well written. I give this a smiley and a well done.
    • 26/07/2009
    • 22:36:48
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  • Your Race, Your Life : Whether it plays a role in your life

    Very interesting topic, shows you really put your mind into your wording. well done.
    • 25/07/2009
    • 23:36:11
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  • Stress, Race and Substance use in College

    Really well done. Shows you put your time and effort into this essay. Unfortunately it is all squished up, but other wise it was a really good essay.
    • 25/07/2009
    • 23:34:38
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  • Phobias

    Having fear of something makes you normal. If you had no fears whatsoever, either you were born to do so or you are a robot. Well done on the essay.
    • 25/07/2009
    • 23:31:29
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  • The Challenges of Intelligence

    I agree with hopeworks, the beginning was very interesting, then the conclusion was a bit sloppy, but other wise. Well done.
    • 25/07/2009
    • 23:28:54
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  • Bipolar Disorder

    Emotions are the things that make us human. This was a very good read and an interesting topic. Well done.
    • 25/07/2009
    • 23:26:18
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  • Asian Stereotypes

    Sadly this is so true in todays society. Stereotypes have even carried onto those asians who were born in North America. Well done
    • 24/07/2009
    • 23:26:36
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  • Difficulties of Parenting.

    It is true parenting is the most difficult and confusing time in an adults life. Especially if you are a teenage father/mother. Good work on this essay, Well done.
    • 24/07/2009
    • 23:23:03
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  • Drug laws

    I don't agree with your points, but your essay provided a good debate on this topic. Well done.
    • 23/07/2009
    • 23:11:54
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  • The physical and social differences between men and women

    This essay shows that everyone is unique in their own individual way. this was a very interesting read, well done.
    • 23/07/2009
    • 23:10:06
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  • Secrets to Building a strong relationship

    i love the African proverb. It adds a nice touch to the essay. Shows you put time and thought into this. Well done.
    • 23/07/2009
    • 23:08:00
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  • Nature, Nurture, or Both

    wonderful essay, classic points used. you should use more sources in your essay but overall great essay
    • 23/07/2009
    • 22:40:41
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  • Media Violence's Effect on Children

    Same here, even though i don't agree with your essay, it still makes an interesting read. Good work.
    • 21/07/2009
    • 23:37:35
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  • Effects of Advertising

    Very well done essay. This topic was very interesting also. Its true that tobacco company knows how people think. Especially women. Good job.
    • 21/07/2009
    • 23:36:07
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  • Part-time job while going to school.

    Balance is the key. If you can balance both a part time job and homework. I would say go for it. But if your grades are suffering, maybe its not the right time yet. Good essay.
    • 21/07/2009
    • 23:32:03
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  • War on Drugs

    I recommend that you watch "Penn & Tellers: Bull sh*t" episode: War on drugs to back up your points. overall well done.
    • 20/07/2009
    • 21:58:41
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  • What is the American Dream?

    Really interesting essay topic, shows great thought process and compassion in this essay. Good work
    • 20/07/2009
    • 21:54:53
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  • Transformation In Prison, and How It Dehumanizes It's Inmates.

    Prison does change people, but for some of them deserve their punishment for their crimes. Overall a good essay. Good job
    • 20/07/2009
    • 21:53:25
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  • Teens and Drugs

    Very good parent perspective on this social issue. Points were very well presented. Good work.
    • 19/07/2009
    • 12:26:22
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • The Inportance of Social Experience

    Excellent essay topic. You presented some very interesting points. Keep the good stuff coming. Good work.
    • 19/07/2009
    • 12:23:57
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  • Globalization and Everyday Life

    Very interesting essay topic. You have made some very good points on how globalization is tied to every aspect of how we live and what surrounds us. Good job
    • 19/07/2009
    • 12:21:45
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  • Feminism

    Good essay topic. I agree with bre_b on how women were treated so poorly. Even to this day there are still some anti-Feminism, but the good thing is that changed a lot from back then.
    • 19/07/2009
    • 12:19:10
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  • Death Penalty

    You made some very interesting points. I also agree with you that death would be too easy for them and the family of the victim will feel as if they have been cheated. Life in prison with no chance of leaving is good enough. Good job
    • 19/07/2009
    • 12:15:34
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  • Legalize drugs

    You made some very interesting points. This topic has been debated over and over, so this is a good essay to reference to. Well done.
    • 19/07/2009
    • 12:12:11
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  • Selling to the Sexes

    Sex sells, this statement is so true. Good essay topic, shows how society has changed a lot since back then. Good job
    • 19/07/2009
    • 12:09:31
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  • Beauty And The Beast

    Very good highlights on the change of womens rights throughout the ages. Your conclusion is excellent. Well done.
    • 19/07/2009
    • 12:07:01
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  • Deviance and Social Control

    Punishment always follows an act of deviance, very good essay. It has no repetition and has good sources. Well done.
    • 19/07/2009
    • 12:04:01
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  • Karl Marx's Theory of Alienation

    i have agree with italian_empress, a lot of areas were formatted oddly, but overall it was an interesting read.
    • 19/07/2009
    • 12:01:10
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  • Effect of Population Density

    Very good essay topic. You are completely write, even though urbanization is good. You have to slow it down due to the affect on the environment. Well done.
    • 19/07/2009
    • 11:58:05
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  • ADHD

    Good essay, but their are some small typos. Overall you made some good points. Well done.
    • 18/07/2009
    • 19:45:04
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  • Eating Disorders in Athletes

    Very well informed and detailed essay. Eating disorders are no laughing matter and should be taken more seriously. I'm glad you pointed out what the athletes are going through. Well done.
    • 18/07/2009
    • 19:42:08
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  • Nature of Logic and Perception Paper

    My favorite part is the conclusion"For the most part, there is no right or wrong in our perceptions, all perceptions are our own reality." This is a very interesting essay topic. References are well done.
    • 18/07/2009
    • 19:39:05
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  • D-Day

    Really great essay. It had a lot of the main points you needed to know about D-Day. Well done.
    • 18/07/2009
    • 19:37:01
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  • Soldier in Vietnam

    I liked the extra bits of info. It gives the reader some thinking to do. Well done.
    • 17/07/2009
    • 23:43:46
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • After The Atomic Bomb

    A very devastating weapon of mass destruction. This is a very interesting topic. Good length and sources. Well done.
    • 17/07/2009
    • 23:40:26
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  • The relationship between sugar and slavery in the early modern period.

    Very good essay. It really explains the intricate bonding between sweets and slavery. Well done.
    • 17/07/2009
    • 23:38:45
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Why were the Viet Minh able to defeat the French by 1954?

    Very interesting essay. As a born Vietnamese/Canadian i had no idea of the rich history in Vietnam. Glad you wrote this essay.
    • 17/07/2009
    • 23:35:45
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  • Albert Einstein

    Superb. I am writing an essay for school on Albert Einstein. Thank you for this biography. well done.
    • 17/07/2009
    • 00:03:12
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  • Deaths of Romeo and Juliet

    I never though of the Friar as a big influence in their deaths. Good points. Very well done explanations.
    • 17/07/2009
    • 00:00:57
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  • Why is Life Cellular

    Good text book like answer. I needed these to improve my bio notes. Thank you.
    • 16/07/2009
    • 23:58:22
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  • Las Vegas The Adult Amusement Park

    What happens in Vegas stays in Vegas. Awesome essay topic, i love Vegas. Well done.
    • 16/07/2009
    • 23:56:11
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  • History of the word Harlot

    Very interesting stuff. good comments too. this would really help me.
    • 16/07/2009
    • 23:54:27
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  • Affirmative Action

    Great wording and format. I really enjoyed reading this topic. Good grammar good length. Well done.
    • 15/07/2009
    • 22:36:39
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  • Physical Education

    Good essay topic and an interesting read. This really opened my eyes. Good grammar good length. Well done.
    • 15/07/2009
    • 22:34:32
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Homework

    I agree on "less homework is more". There is simply too much extra homework. Even though its good for you, too much of anything is bad for your health. Well done.
    • 15/07/2009
    • 22:29:44
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Suicide

    Suicide is devastating for everybody. Loss of a life should be taken very seriously. I am glad this essay explains theories on this subject. Well done.
    • 15/07/2009
    • 22:26:44
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  • Description of personality disorders

    Very detailed descriptions. I enjoyed everything about this essay. Well done.
    • 15/07/2009
    • 22:21:22
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  • Miscarriage

    It is a sad reality. This was a well written and well thought out essay. Good work.
    • 15/07/2009
    • 01:00:02
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  • Authority and Obedience

    Good thorough essay. I found this topic really interesting and glad you created it. This is one of the better essays, good grammar, good references. Well done.
    • 15/07/2009
    • 00:49:54
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Comparing Buddha and Jesus' lives and Ideas.

    Good essay topic. This was a very interesting read. A little work with the grammar and this essay would be one of the better ones. well done.
    • 13/07/2009
    • 23:15:29
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  • Buddhist Religion

    Excellent! i agree with agakutyna, this is a perfect way for others to learn more about other peoples views and perspectives on life. Very good references and well done.
    • 13/07/2009
    • 23:13:21
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  • Subculture:the meaning of style

    Good points. Really interesting essay topic. Shows good thought process within the essay. Well done.
    • 13/07/2009
    • 23:06:22
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  • In what ways can occupation and employment affect identity?

    My favorite part of the essay is the last part. "My name is Ettan Bazil. I am unemployed and will one daybe a successful Psychologist" It shows how you still follow your dreams despite being unemployed. Give yours self a pat on the back for this terrific essay.
    • 13/07/2009
    • 22:52:31
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Sociology

    I agree with Cowgirl82302. This essay is excellent. comes with all the essentials, grammar, length and quality. Well done.
    • 13/07/2009
    • 22:44:58
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  • The Sociology of Integrating a Preschooler Into an Existing Daycare Group

    Day cares are essential for a child growth. Good points, good references. well done.
    • 13/07/2009
    • 22:43:18
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  • I am who I am.

    I believe this is one of the most important things in life. Discovery and acceptance of who you truly are, and not who others want you to be. Good topic. Well done.
    • 13/07/2009
    • 22:41:28
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  • Thinking Critically.

    I agree with zmike, could be longer. Well written points, and good grammar. Well done.
    • 12/07/2009
    • 22:47:35
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  • Parental loss: Effects on teens

    Shows great thought process. Good references,good wording, good grammar. Good essay.
    • 12/07/2009
    • 22:46:05
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Drinking

    Teen drinking is a huge debate. I am 19 and i do not agree for youngsters to drink, but hey. They always find a way. Good essay.
    • 12/07/2009
    • 22:43:45
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  • Emotions

    From what i read from this essay, Emotions are a very powerful part of human nature. Interesting essay, good points good read. Well done
    • 12/07/2009
    • 22:40:37
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Verbal abuse

    Really good points. Abuse of all nature is terrible. Well thought out. Good job.
    • 11/07/2009
    • 22:51:04
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Developmental Psychology (physical, cognitive, and psychosocial

    Great points! This is a very well thought out essay. Good grammar, and thought processes. Well done overall.
    • 11/07/2009
    • 22:49:43
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Gender Development

    Roles of genders has truly changed. Good essay topic, nice list of references, good grammar, and well done overall.
    • 11/07/2009
    • 22:47:38
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Childhood sexual abuse

    clearly shows you put your thoughts into a organized meaningful essay. good points and grammar. well done
    • 11/07/2009
    • 22:45:57
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • How To Treat People

    Always greet people with a smile my favorite part of the essay . Good points and well organized. Well done.
    • 11/07/2009
    • 22:42:33
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Determining Your Perfect Position in Business

    You make some excellent points. Good length, references and grammar. Well done
    • 09/07/2009
    • 23:29:04
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • A traditional China Wedding

    Complicated but interesting. Good essay overall. Kinda short, but well done.
    • 09/07/2009
    • 23:27:27
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  • Depressing

    Good points and citation. Very informative about the sad reality in youth suicides. well done.
    • 06/07/2009
    • 22:52:14
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  • Interesting

    I do not agree that video games makes children more violent, but i agree that this essay is pretty interesting. Good work
    • 06/07/2009
    • 22:49:13
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  • Excellent points

    I believe happiness is when you are surrounded by those who love you most, but a balance of money and family is always better.I also totally agree with your conclusion. good job.
    • 06/07/2009
    • 22:45:27
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  • Excellent

    Every thing is good except a little typo, "The bible isn't the only source which talks about how life came into being.Hinduism with its 33 [crore] gods, has multiple stories of creation." Good mix of religion and modern views, very well done.
    • 05/07/2009
    • 22:25:48
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  • Japanese essay

    great essay. very informative and good sources
    • 05/07/2009
    • 21:06:32
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  • Good essay

    really interesting essay. i liked your view of Dracula. good grammar
    • 05/07/2009
    • 21:04:49
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  • Good points

    good points in the essay but cant make out most of the words. near the end
    • 27/05/2009
    • 20:06:28
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  • Good essay

    this is a very good essay on a very important subject matter. i like how your essay sounds like a speech because as i read it i really focus on the words and it draws me in. this is perfect for earth day!!
    • 30/04/2009
    • 18:00:46
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Sleep

    this is a really good essay, its short and to the point as well as keeping my attention. the sources are good too. great work
    • 08/04/2009
    • 21:46:55
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  • Good speech

    this is a really good speech and i like how u formated the outline. this is a really good topic too because everyone is concerned about sugar these days. just a decade ago we wouldn't be thinking of eating whole wheat bread but now we are, i guess one day we will see sugar free products lining our shelfs
    • 21/03/2009
    • 15:01:35
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  • Why do Students Plagiarize?

    very good essay and as a student myself this essay is really interesting. good sources. im sure this is become a super essay.
    • 14/02/2009
    • 21:39:08
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  • Hunting

    good essay too bad it doesnt have any references
    • 31/01/2009
    • 14:05:48
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  • HIV/AIDS - Description, causes, statistics etc.

    good essay very detailed but its missing references
    • 27/01/2009
    • 12:19:13
    • Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Telemachus and Odysseus

    good small essay but lacks a lot of detail and examples but gets the job done.
    • 24/01/2009
    • 15:49:02
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  • Good essay

    one of the best essay on the relationship between amir and hassan that ive seen. good intro but conclusion needs some work. overall good essay
    • 09/01/2009
    • 10:56:01
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  • Good essay

    its a pretty good essay that raises awareness but it should have a list of sources.
    • 07/01/2009
    • 16:22:04
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  • Great essay

    this is a really good essay it shows a clear understanding of Frankenstein and formalism. this is really good because art is really hard to analyze yet the author did a great job explaining it. the essay sums up nicely at the end and had lots of info throughout the essay.
    • 07/01/2009
    • 14:37:31
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  • Nice essay

    well though i don't agree with your essay its still a pretty good essay. i live in Toronto and i don't share the same views. i consider him as a sort of traitor. it was obvious that he didn't want to be on Toronto's team at all.
    • 07/01/2009
    • 10:31:11
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  • A thousand Splendid Suns

    doesn't seem much like an essay, no structure and intro no conclusion. BUT if i was looking for a short summary of the whole book in a paragraph this would be one of the best after all i cant complain this is the only essay on this site on A thousand Splendid Suns
    • 05/01/2009
    • 17:15:58
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  • Comparing Dystopic Worlds

    really great essay the evidence from both books balances well. it shows a clear comparison of both books. its amazing that this is a 10 grade essay. i couldn't have done it better myself.the finishing sentence " When a government arises to take power without the question or consent of the people, then is it utopia, or chaos and slavery?" that is gold, good stuff to leave the reader to think about the essay.
    • 05/01/2009
    • 14:12:55
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  • Evolution of Man, From Homo Habilis to Homo Sapiens Sapiens

    yeah there isnt much detail in this at all and its missing references. but it is a grade 10 level so i guess its not bad.
    • 03/01/2009
    • 13:09:05
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  • Comment

    oh wow this is not 11th grade and if it is then the school must be extremely gifted. excellent info i just wish all the science essays on this site was this detailed. nice to see someone actually upload attachments and they are really good. good references too.
    • 03/01/2009
    • 13:07:19
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  • DNA

    DNA is a very board subject so theres tons of information that can be said. this essay is really short for something about DNA, but i guess its quality not quantity. although this seems like a bunch of info put together and not really an essay or science paper at all. its also missing references. but good effort
    • 03/01/2009
    • 12:58:04
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  • Fungi

    good essay, all the info is there and the structure is pretty good. this is actually a really good essay for 10th grade. i liked that it covers everything about fungi and it concludes well in the last paragraph. but unfortunity theres no references otherwise it would be excellent.
    • 03/01/2009
    • 12:51:37
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  • Argon

    nice essay and good info could have been a super essay if it just had references such a shame.
    • 03/01/2009
    • 12:31:31
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  • Decay of Gatsby's Dream

    i totally agree with this essay. Gatsby reached the American dream but he was blinded by the love for Daisy and the book ended cruelly for him. Gatsby worked very hard it took him 5 years to gain his wealth yet he still cannot achieve true happiness without Daisy's love. the points were great and the introduction paragraph really draws you in while the concluding paragraph summarizes the essay very well, i particularly like the last sentence which gives us a lesson to think about after we read the essay. great work
    • 03/01/2009
    • 05:25:07
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  • Tom Buchanan & Myrtle Wilson

    its an kayo essay. all the points were valid but i don't understand why the essay starts out comparing East and West Eggers because Myrtle Wilson doesn't live in neither of them but instead she lives in the valley of ashes with her husband. but other then that the essay was fine and the concluding paragraph summarized the essay well.
    • 03/01/2009
    • 05:16:02
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  • A Time of Change In "The Great Gatsby" by F.Scott Fitzgerald

    although the format and structure of this essay isn't the best I've seen, the quotes were well analyzed. i think the concluding paragraph needs a bit of work to tie everything together.
    • 02/01/2009
    • 13:57:26
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  • Hydrogen cars

    good points and info but these need sources/references.
    • 02/01/2009
    • 05:08:19
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  • The Great Gatsby

    really good essay I'm glad the writer noticed all these hidden symbolism in the novel. i didn't get most of the symbols the first time i read the book.
    • 28/12/2008
    • 13:31:55
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  • Great essay

    you make a lot of good points. i just finished reading this novel and i didn't notice these symbols. but i think the green light at the dock was also a symbol you forgot to mention
    • 28/12/2008
    • 08:35:18
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  • Plagiarism

    this is a very interesting essay especially and it is important the way it reminds us not to Plagiarize. the first paragraph really draws you into the subject matter and forces you to continue reading. i completely agree with this essay, that Plagiarism hurts everyone involved. good job on this essay.
    • 27/12/2008
    • 15:19:25
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  • Good essay

    wow this opened my eyes to Sudden infant death syndrome. never knew something like that existed
    • 25/12/2008
    • 09:42:33
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  • Good essay

    this is a fine written essay and very organized with the table of contents makes its easy to see that the author put a lot of work into it
    • 25/12/2008
    • 09:40:40
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  • Cardiovascular System

    its a good essay but could be perfect if it had references
    • 25/12/2008
    • 09:39:19
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  • Good essay

    this is a good essay but its also missing references. i doubt that this got an A+
    • 25/12/2008
    • 09:37:45
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  • Nervous system

    this is a good essay i even suspected that it was plagiarized but its not. its very detailed good job
    • 25/12/2008
    • 09:35:44
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  • Darwin vs. Gould

    this is a well written essay but i still support Darwin
    • 25/12/2008
    • 09:33:03
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  • China debate

    this is a really good debate, at first i thought it needed reference but then again i'm not sure about whether debates needs reference
    • 25/12/2008
    • 09:30:10
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  • Taj Mahal essay

    its a bit short and no referenceit can be a bit more detailed too
    • 25/12/2008
    • 09:27:11
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  • Carbon dioxide

    I always thought carbon dioxide was bad for us and the environment
    • 24/12/2008
    • 11:20:08
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  • Good discovery

    the enzyme acts as a catalyst to speed up reaction in the experiment
    • 24/12/2008
    • 11:05:23
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  • Evolution

    this is a good essay it explains how a species on an island can be similar to the species in the mainland
    • 24/12/2008
    • 11:03:06
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  • Ecology

    looks like you know a lot about ecology
    • 24/12/2008
    • 10:50:01
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