Nice tutorial, found it useful. Might try it one day!
- 01/05/2007
- 02:15:45
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I feel you man, well that's fishing for you. Anyways, shouldn't your creative piece be longer, I mean your in yr12 and its only 314 words.
- 23/04/2007
- 23:17:32
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The length is OK. The intro needs some work, its a bit short and you have not established a strong thesis. Overall its pretty good.
- 16/04/2007
- 04:45:13
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
You've established a good thesis but you need to expand more on how techniques in the poems shape the meaning of the concept.
- 03/04/2007
- 22:50:19
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Your essay is pretty good, theres a balance between the two texts. But I think you need to talk more about how techniques give meaning. Good work! Btw you spelt Austen wrong.
- 25/03/2007
- 00:22:52
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Good essay, the length is perfect, but you need to explain how the concept of the journey is shaped through the techniques.
- 11/03/2007
- 18:29:23
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Essay is way too short, and the intro needs more attention. You need to include your opinion in a subtle way and you must have quotes from your text to support what you have said.
- 02/03/2007
- 18:11:09
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Great essay, great read. Keep it up. well done!
- 20/02/2007
- 21:56:53
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Great essay,well analyzed piece of writing. Good work!
- 13/02/2007
- 22:03:20
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Great read, very interesting topic. Keep it up!!
- 05/02/2007
- 22:27:16
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Not very creative and very short. Why would freshwater anglers target Bream, it's a saltwater fish.
- 29/01/2007
- 20:35:22
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Cool poem, Very well done. Keep it up!!
- 22/01/2007
- 03:17:44
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Cool essay, very well done. Keep it up!
- 16/01/2007
- 13:14:44
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Nice compilation of information, was very useful. Thanks!
- 09/01/2007
- 15:21:56
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100% agree. Great essay. Keep it up!
- 01/01/2007
- 19:45:24
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Nice topic. Well done essay. Keep it up!
- 26/12/2006
- 15:22:10
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Its good, I like it. Its only a little too brief.
- 16/12/2006
- 15:58:44
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Interesting argument. Nice points!
- 11/12/2006
- 20:55:19
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Your essay is ok but it lacks facts. You need to back up your starements.
- 07/12/2006
- 20:46:37
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Nice topic. Well done essay.
- 29/11/2006
- 00:47:17
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Very good analysis!
- 22/11/2006
- 22:31:49
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
You got some very good points. Good work.
- 12/11/2006
- 21:01:15
- Score: 0 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
An excellent essay, great points, good work!!
- 05/11/2006
- 20:24:36
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Cool info..helped me alot. Thanks!!
- 31/10/2006
- 01:40:00
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Cool essay, covers almost everything. Good work!
- 19/10/2006
- 23:23:47
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A very cool and informative essay. Good job.
- 06/10/2006
- 17:22:00
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Nicely done essay. Very good work. Enjoyed alot.Thanks
- 29/09/2006
- 06:11:09
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Pretty good work. I like it.
- 20/09/2006
- 22:36:38
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Cool essay. Well Done.
- 11/09/2006
- 23:04:58
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
A very good piece of work, helped me alot. Thanks.
- 08/09/2006
- 17:50:47
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Well thought out and written. Great work!
- 04/09/2006
- 15:19:29
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Good work for a 9th grader. Keep it up!
- 27/08/2006
- 22:51:16
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
A very interesting read! Great.
- 15/08/2006
- 03:00:05
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
A very interesting piece of work...
- 07/08/2006
- 05:17:25
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Well written essay and very interesting. Good Work.
- 25/07/2006
- 00:09:10
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I think it is too short. You need to write more.
- 15/07/2006
- 03:13:03
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
A very detailed essay. Well thought out. Good work!
- 11/07/2006
- 00:23:58
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Well thought out and written essay. Great work!!
- 02/07/2006
- 18:02:10
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
An interesting read. Well Done!!
- 22/06/2006
- 23:27:20
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
An interesting piece of writing. Well done.
- 15/06/2006
- 01:46:37
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Well written essay. Well done!
- 09/06/2006
- 22:11:31
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Well thought out and very interesting. Good job!
- 28/05/2006
- 20:03:27
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
A nice essay, well written and informative. Alot of facts as well. Well done.
- 21/05/2006
- 23:18:27
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
A nice essay, well written and informative. Nice work.
- 13/05/2006
- 16:28:23
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is a good essay. All the facts seem to be correct. well done
- 06/05/2006
- 17:05:15
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Easy to read and understand, just a little short. Well done
- 24/04/2006
- 19:29:11
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Your essay seems to be good, but it needs some structural improvement.
- 15/04/2006
- 08:11:15
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Very well thought out and written essay. Great work!!
- 15/04/2006
- 08:06:02
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is way too short and you have no paragraphs. Needs a lot or work.
- 06/04/2006
- 03:45:19
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
A well thought out and written essay. Great work!!
- 31/03/2006
- 00:33:40
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Well thought out and easy to read. Great work.
- 23/03/2006
- 00:45:07
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Your essay seems to have good information and structure but it lacks in the way it is written.
- 09/03/2006
- 05:46:55
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I don't really understand your essay, the points you made about being open minded and not being stubborn. Your essay is also way too short.
- 18/02/2006
- 16:47:02
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
The problem with your essay is that it's too short. Your points are good but, they can be improved if you expand on them.
- 13/02/2006
- 06:50:11
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Really interesting article to read. Well done!
- 10/02/2006
- 04:11:46
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Your essay can be improved by removing the subtitles, otherwise great work.
- 06/02/2006
- 05:54:44
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I found this very interesting to read and sure others will as well. Great work.
- 18/12/2005
- 20:30:13
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Your essay is too short and can be improved by adding more detail. You should also add some references.
- 18/12/2005
- 20:16:41
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Your essay its way too short, you need to expand on your writing and add more information.
- 18/12/2005
- 19:57:34
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Your essay isn't too bad but, it mainly deals with your feelings rather than facts. You need to include more facts and less of your feelings.
- 17/12/2005
- 21:27:05
- Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
Well written essay and very interesting. Good job.
- 16/12/2005
- 07:33:36
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
You have compiled a nice and informative essay. Good Work.
- 16/12/2005
- 07:29:39
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
It interested me and I'm sure it will for others, a well written essay on colonialism.
- 12/12/2005
- 08:32:03
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Well written essay, it is fluent and gets your message across. Well done.
- 12/12/2005
- 08:25:05
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Your essay seems to be well thought out and written. Its just a bit short but, that can easily be fixed.
- 12/12/2005
- 08:17:22
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Your essay is OK overall, but its a bit short and would be better if you wrote more.
- 02/12/2005
- 08:12:06
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
You have compiled a nice essay but you could make it better by adding references or sources.
- 29/11/2005
- 02:36:36
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
It seems that you have put a lot of time and work into this essay.Your points are well organised along wih a good structure. Nice work!
- 29/11/2005
- 02:29:06
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Easy to read and understand and it gets the message across. Well done.
- 22/11/2005
- 06:12:05
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Well written essay, can be improved with the bibliography.
- 22/11/2005
- 06:09:26
- Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
A lot of statistics and very persuasive, nice work!!
- 09/10/2005
- 06:07:50
- Score: 5 out of 18 people found this comment useful.
Imagine all those countries combining. Well thought out.
- 02/10/2005
- 08:51:03
- Score: 8 out of 27 people found this comment useful.
i like the points you listed.very useful
- 05/08/2005
- 02:09:48
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.